Reviews for What Are They Good For

Roy-Chibi
2008-08-20
ch 1,

abuseActually I think this is pretty sad for a one-shot like this. But, then again, I'm up for sad endings and things like these.

THOUGH... it's not ** to me. I especially adore the "He doesn't mean it" paragraph.

Janus... xD
Well I named the Guardian spirit after one letter! "Z" XD
The first go-round, it was "Ace" second go-round, it's "Z" LOL I'm lame...

Brenda924
2008-05-26
ch 1,

abuseBefore I review the story: Man, I HATED the Veinroot afterling! I kept killing it! Haha. I just finished the game a few hours ago, and that's still the boss I 'died' most on.

And on to the story...I really like it. It's a very realistic take on what a Guardian Spirit would be thinking, I think. It's much deeper than my thoughts of, "'What power'? I control every little movement you make. Right after you stop yelling at me, I think I'm gonna make you run laps around Anuenue!", haha. I like the writing style, too, there's no need to apologize for it.

Great job! Keep writing, okay?

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