This was amazing and entertaining and suspenseful and PERFECT.

Daniel was - had been - was a real 'hey, let's talk about that time you shot yourself in the head' kind of guy. Best. Quote. Ever.

Lovely story.

Excellent story. Extremely well written, had me questioning the whole time. :D

Excelent story and compelling mystery. I have to admit I was thinking clones or the alien chameleon device but not what was the ultimate solution. The story was well written and greatly enjoyed.

Thank you

Very nicely done with a concise writing sytle that suits the character of Jack so well. I'm not a huge fan of AU but I did enjoy this piece. Using Abyss as a jump off point was a great idea. Thanks for sharing!

I enjoyed every moment of this story. Great Jack voice, superb characterisations all round, wonderfully written and terrific plotting. I never guessed what was going on and you kept me on my toes right until the end. Superb!

Wow- that was just really well written! You caught the humor, the irreverence, and the drama just right. And so clever! "The reponse was almost pavlovic" Although you tricked me into reading an AU which I normally never do. It was really good. I was glad to know the Jack I was rooting for was 'our' Jack.

I really should re-read it now that I know what's going on.

Thanks for writing.
Gotta go check out your other stuff now.

This is absolutely fantastic. I love OtherCarter and how vividly you managed to show her discomfort, reticence, carefully-lidded pain. I love your descriptions of McKay, of the planet. I love how you got inside annoyed!snarky!Jack's head and everything, even the exposition and narrative, SOUNDED like him. I like that you didn't succumb to the desire (that I always feel anyway) to give tidy answers to every question raise. I love that I did not figure out that this was the wrong SGC at all, how I didn't see coming where you were going, and how it all fell perfectly together.

Really outstanding work. Thank you.

Great story! Not too angsty, and I kept thinking all along, "This is *wrong*, Jack wouldn't do that, but how could they fake it?" I never saw your twist coming, even as I was thinking, "McKay shouldn't be there!" (And I'm a Bill Lee fan, but I can understand that Jack might not be.) Nice job on Rodney--very much the annoying Rodney we see on SG-1.

The dreams work well, too, adding layers to the story. I'm not certain if they're purely in Jack's head, or if Daniel is trying to reach him subtly--I'm quite inclined to the latter. Either way, they give hints without giving up the main story.

what a great story! another great creation by my favorite FFnet author! I wish I could have even a little bit of your talent!

I just have to say that I'm such a huge fan - I've read almost everything you've posted (the further to fky series I read close to 10 times by now) and I never get tiered of you unique style and your amazing ideas...
like I said - you're my favorite ffnet writer and you're ranking pretty high on my list of writers in general

Great.
Nicely written, very in character and a great story.

Wow! Fantastic story. I didn't see that ending coming at all, but it totally made sense with how Carter and the others were acting. Excellent plot and conclusion. Thanks for writing.

Loved the story and the way it's written, keeps the reader hooked and on their toes. Good tension and Jack's thinking and humour is right. Certainly an interesting idea of kidnapping Jack from one reality to another... he's certainly going to have fun at that debriefing!

The only bits I'm not too sure of are the ones with Daniel in I thinking they are belong to that other reality and that the dead Jack is possibly stuck between worlds with Daniel trying to show him the way and at the end he either goes off with Daniel and stays ascended or perhaps descends and goes back to earth.

Wish it was longer. But that just means I didn't want it to end.