Just found this. it's great. good work! hope the new year in NSW is treating you well :)

i love this story! its fantastic! but what you cant leave it there! whats gunna happen with victoria? will bella be alone or with the cullens? oh i cant wait to see what you come up with!! PLEASE POST MORE SOON!!

Fantastic! I can't wait to see where this goes.

Rose is kind of a hypocrite here.

A) She never liked Bella.
B) She was happy to leave Bella.
C) NOBODY FORCED the rest of the Cullens to ABANDON the girl they said (liars) they loved like a daughter. They left her to die without an argument.

Love your story... couldn't put it down once I found it. Hope you continue to post chapters soon. I'd like to see more back-stories with interactions between the Cullens and Bella and Edward. Great job!

I Love It

Can't wait to read what happens next!

Awesome! I was wondering when we would get to explore Bella's gift. Can't wait for more. Happy Holidays!

I don't know why you would say this chapter was not up to par. It seemed well-put-together to me!

I'm an American, and I think the little nuances in your story that show you are Australian are so cute!

Wow! I didn't know I could hate Victoria more, than I already did, but I do now! Great writing.

o-mysterious--what is going to happen?

o-this was a particularly fantastic chapter. Way to go!

This looks like a fun fic! Good opener, to be sure. I see it is rated M, which makes me a bit nrevous, as I really don't like lots of smut. It there is lots, maybe you could warn me now?
Thanks for sharing.

Fantastic! I normally hate cliff hangers but that one was so well written and i have the next chapter to read right now.