Nice chapter, you're doing a lot better. I can't wait for the next chapter, one question though, were is the Outsider?

Nice, you're improving though it would be better if you made the chapters longer. Other than that keep up the good work!

Nice first chapter and the last story was cool as well. You definitly are improving. I'm wondering what the ninjas think of the Outsider, I mean he is not something you see everyday. Also I'd like to know if you were planing to use Ultraman in theses stories, I'd like to see him. Anyway keep up the good work.