that was a great story i enjoyed it a great deal. and hope that you write a sequl.

Sheesh, Ron is such an evil git in this chapter. >< I'm glad Hermione has someone nice like Harry in this. ;D

Please make a sequel! But no harem please!

I agree with space odin in both reviews: 1) Sequels, and lots of'em; 2) Harems in'em, as both Harry and Hermione need the help - watching their backs, WASHING their backs, and other important tasks - plus I really feel sorry for the Ladies of Harry's Happy Harem (although the other names were too cool not to use sometime)and feel they deserve more along the lines of...fulfillment, shall we say?...and there are so many more possibles to add to the H.H.H. roster.
Like the entire Harpies line up, for example...

Oh...I DO like your plans for a sequel! Only thing I'd ask you to add is - save Sirius and have him and Moony live happily ever after.

Oh, and torture Molly Weasley.

And Snape.

Don't forget the Malfoys.

Both of them.

That was a very nice story indeed. You have a mature, flowing style that's easy and enjoyable to read, a deft touch with dialogue and a light comedic touch. I sincerely hope you do a sequel - I haven't checked your homepage yet - as I would love to see where you take all the loose ends.

What a good chapter! Hey if they are protecting Harry does this mean they are going to follow him into the Maze? Not to help him of course but can we leave Cedric alive?

Cute. Except for the Weasleys.

I don't think Harry wants a harem. That isn't a normal life.

Really I can see Ron thinking this way.

Excellent start!

of course tom riddle would be a distant uncle to harry potter since all purebloods intermarry everyone is related to everyone else, the only real question is how closely related are they.

as far as ways for ron and ginny to get who they want you could always try slave bracelets? where in there are two bracelets one for the master and one for the slave. they would have two sets of the bracelets which they would get from their brother bill's collection of things he has brought back from a tomb. now of course this being a northern africa middle eastern type item one of the patil twins figures out what they are and snatch them and switch them around so that ron and ginny become the saves to crabbe and millie.

should ginny be upset that granger is dating harry? hell yah she thinks harry is her man as well as his fame and money are hers as well.

Come one! This was freaking great! Awesome, like it.

oh yeah i forgot to put this in my other review. I WANT THE SEQUEL TO BE A HAREM! that is all.