this is good too! you capture ruka's feeling very well!~

one thing i wanna mention though, the paragraphs all seem to get bundled together, it made the article a little difficult to read/keep track.

but the writing is really good.
keep it up!
i'll keep on reading. =)

Hi! I didn't really know how to reply other than writing to the review section again, sorry. I'm not sure where I found the link, might have been d-addicts (are you a member at ? Somehow I imagine that the link was in the LF thread over there). Anyway, looking forward to more, and I dunno - good luck? ^^,

I quite liked this little rantfic, and I think you captured Ruka's thoughts well. You're good at what you're doing, so do write something more from this series =) ...I need all I can get of it XD