I forgot to review. Loved the notes, that Bant has a way with words. Even Qui Gon agrees. Maybe it would have been best to let him go instead of living a lie.

I love your stories! Especially these Anakinisalittlebratgrrihatehim kind of ones! Your writing style is really good! Keep writing? Please?

Poor Bant and Esther, being locked up but not being able to tell Obi-Wan.
Anakin is being a complete brat. If I was Obi-Wan I would just hand him over to Yoda.
It was a really good update, write more when you can please.

Awesome so far! Really good! I can hardly wait for more!

Heehee! Look who's being a bad influence, Bant! Anyways, hope Obi will expel the brat and rescue Bant and co. More?

put in innuendos - just put them in... er, nicely. *giggle*
I know how you feel, actually - I've been hanging around too much in the National Treasure, lol.

I need to remember how to write Star Wars stuff again. teehee.

thanks for updating!

Aw! I hope Bant and Esther will be alright.

*hits Anakin* You're giving your Master a headache.

*hits Obi-Wan* You worry too much. Although, you do have a point somewhere in there... xD

Nice update - short, though xP

-Jaeh ^^

Yay! An update! I hope Bant and Esther will be ok! Please update soon!

Ee! Very glad to see this updated, first of all... Second... I liked this! It made complete sense, and was very nicely done. An interesting blend of drama, angst, and suspense.

Interesting...
I hope you update soon!

I love it! This is very star wars, and very true to the characters... more...please...faster! :)

*pokes* update? please? wanna know what happens.

woah...like...woah...that is the most evil cliffhanger of all time...
wow this is totaly awesome,like super mega ultra awesome XD
and i too have got to school and realised that I'm still wearing my pj top under my shirt and have one school sock and one fluffy pink one XD it has indeed been done =]update soon!

I really like this story. Especially the way you write it like adding in flashes of the present while telling the story.
Poor Obi-Wan, what happened? I hope he's going to be alright.
The letters between Obi-Wan and Bant are a good way of adding humour too.

I really like this story, I hope that you keep writing it! I really want to find out what happened to them... please? ;)

I'd love to see more of this. You have a great start so far. Please continue soon!