ha! i love the toaster thingy! are they going to take her with them or not? urgh, i wanna know! :) good story!

hey great chapter update chapter 6 soon .

Hey that was great. please write more chapters. Put more future stuff in it. And please make Lex go with them too. And also some almost paradoxs that they have to fix like in the movies.thanks.

:-)

*looking shocked* Marty thinks the music is too LOUD? That's a switch, isn't it? LOL

Nah, just kidding. This is good too. (sorry, I know I'm starting to sound like a broken record, but I'm still not finding anything to comment on or constructively criticize)

And?...what happened? Did they take her with them?

Off to a great start! Looking forward to reading more!

You obviously don't know at all how Marty and Doc act. You should probably watch a BTTF movie once a day then maybe you'll know how they act. Other then that very good.

its a flux CAPACITOR. i think

PLS. Watch all three movies and try to understand how the characters talk, their speech, idoms and etc...

I am a very big fan of the "Back To The Future" movie series and hope you will add more to this featuring Doc's decendant. Keep up the great work!

:)

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So far it's great! Update soon!