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| Fuji Haruka 2008-08-07 ch 1,  | abuseI would have preferred something less of a transcription of the encounter directly from the episode, but you were trying to fit it into canon, so it's okay :D;. I do wish their conversation had been longer and more like this, though. Good job~ |
| Shinzochi 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was a VERY GOOD story, i hope you write more for it. |
| Helen Maxwell 2008-05-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseI agree and I hop you continue this story there's not that many good Mia and Zuko fics that continue |
| Rava77 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseYour additional scenes fit very well into canon. I hope you continue. |
| talonlee 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseAgreed. More had DEFINITELY been said than what we saw. ^_^ Good job... it fits into what I hope he said to her. I really hope he mended at least a little bit of her relationship with him. He's usually not very smooth, but he did a good job when confronting Ozai... maybe he could also be sort of eloquent with Mai... not if only Bryke'll make him rescuing Mai a reality. The thing is, that even if she was still ** off at him, I can't see Mai letting him die. She loves him, even when he's an idiot. |
| DarkJackel 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. It makes sense. |
| razzledazzle41191 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abuseReally great, I loved reading this! |
| sara 2008-05-23 ch 1, anon. | abusegood job i liked it |