Great story! Very funny! And hot, very hot. Your sex scene was pretty realistic, props! Loved it, all of it.

Beautiful! Your writing style is so unique, I absolutely ADORE it! The errors were broad and scattered, but that can always be overlooked with a good plot and a great technique, and you have all that and more! Great job, please keep up the fantastic work!

well. that was awesome and it gave me a laugh. keep up the good work ^_^

Wow. xD The ending was extremely hot. I'm also glad you gained confidence as a writer. When I was just beginning to write smut, I was kind of shy. But now you wouldn't even recognize my most updated smut writing style from my oldest yaoi fiction. What I used to write a long time ago was so tame. O.o Anyways, I look forward to your next update! ;D

Oh, score \o/ This story has been epic, and adorable, and the epilogue was totally awesomeness... and I don't know what to say about it really >.<' It was awesome, though. ^^;;

yay for smut and you updating. and its kinda obvious im going say. UPDATE SOON! please ;)

love this fic. hope you update soon.

this is really good!! why does it have to end?! please please write more NejiKiba fan fictions. You really write wonderful, best fean fiction I've probably ever read. Please write another NejiKiba fan fiction ^^ great great work! Anyways, love it and please write more. Wonderful talent you have! NejiKiba rules too ^^

omg omg omg, this is the best fan fiction I have read in a long time~~!~~ Aboslutly love it! definatly favs

wonderful fan fiction ^^ keep up the great work ^^

NejiKiba forever!

Oh, good lord. I really like this. I'm sorta new to the NejiKiba pairing, but I need to get used to it for a story I'm writing in which Kiba (who is just a supporting character, anyway) is paired with Neji.

But, psh. Kiba sucks on that game, but Kankurou sucks twice as hard. Good gracious. After much button-mashing and one-hit-using on Naruto's part for about three battles in a row, my friends finally tell me to pick someone else so as not to be annoying, and I decide to choose random in the offset that I'll magically get Naruto and be able to be a total assnugget to them once again. How surprised was I when I found myself as Kankurou battling against Rock Lee. The battle starts, and with much aggravation he isn't moving like I want him to. Lee is just kicking him to the curb, Kankurou is just barely responding and when he does, Lee's already attacking him and it winds up useless; the camera angle zooms back, and to my utter horror...there is Karasu...at the other side of the ring...flying forward to attack the audience rather than Lee. Good lord. I refused to give up, though. The next few battles, I picked Kankurou, trying my hardest to get the hang of him. IT DIDN'T WORK; I kept getting confused and staring at Karasu when I was trying to do melee attacks with Kankurou and getting ** off that he wasn't doing anything. He's a complete butt-tard! Geez, I get close to do some close-up combat, and what the hell--Karasu, why the heck are you shooting forward, you piece of crap! Sheesh. Kiba may fail, but Kankurou fails HARD. (Then again, I fail even worse, so that, of course, makes Kankurou phail.)

Hm...but it's fairly easy to find sexy pictures of Kiba on deviantart. Looking up couple pictures is usually more effective; you get a wider variety of different angles and shtuff. (Yeah, I know you've already posted the next chapter and therefore this information is useless, but whatevs. The more you know, I s'pose.)

Hehe, good chapter, I say.
I don't that there wasn't any battle. XD
We (the readers) know that they did fight though, and that's all that matters. XDD

Heh, Kiba's desires are getting stronger.
Awh, and at the end the kiss was sweet. XD
And the biting during the battle. Heh.
Hehe, I didn't really even think about Akamaru. Whoopsie.
Well, it's still good to know where he has been. XD

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!

It was a little rushed but I liked it! ^^ I look forward to that epilogue! XD

So you managed to do it! That's great! And no, the ending wasn't rushed, it was good!! I really liked this chapter, you made it very well. I hadn't noticed Akamaru's absence though...I always forget him whenever I write a story with him in it. Poor Aka...

Hurray! I totally did not notice akamaru wasn't there. i never paid much attention to him anyway. Good story. I'll see you at lunch