wow... i liked it!

Wow that was some story. I never thought that anyone would think of these two being a couple.

Ignore the rude reviews people gave you.

Personally I'd never think of these two as a couple, but it was a cute one-shot ^-^ i enjoyed reading it.

Though, critique wise, try to be a little more detailed, and dont always point out the obvious, like example, "he moaned cause he liked it" you could just simply say "he moaned" or "this feeling caused him to moan"

if that makes sense

but i digress, cute story, i liked it alot, dare to be different and you stand out, im impressed.

lol well im rambling, so bye XD
:.favs the story and favs you.:
Keep writing, I cant wait to read more ^-^

Yeah... you have the sickest mind I have ever seen. Do EVERYONE a favor and cut out the crap, OK? This is seriously wrong. WRONG. This is going to make someone else really mad. Take care of yourself, and maybe get some meds...?

Hope this doesnt effect the worlds balance...
(snap)
Oh **...
Super-Calamity has begun, run for the hills uselessly and go into fetal position as the world ends...
Sorga-I likd the story, sure they do too...
Super-Ya, whatever...

I've got a new fav couple X3 this was awsome!

Wow, never thought I'd see a Shadpio fic on this sight! Great job on it, I liked it. n.n

^_^ cute XD

I like it. I think it's great. Great job on it. ^.^

that was **' hot!!

No offense, but the part when Esp and Shad made up was just wrong. Why did you have to make them homos?!
Well, at least you published a new story

This will kill America.

whoa! Whoa whe! Thats really cool! Really steamy! I loved it! I sure hope Tonya and Rouge don't find out! Or it's hell! LOL! Graet job!

What the hell? O.O sorry, I'm...not into this. >.> Your study hall moments are awkward.