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ChosenMibhar
2008-09-06
ch 3, anon.
abusei loved the humor
ChosenMibhar
2008-09-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseThe first chapter was so intriguing! I’m soo hooked--Oh and your writing style is awesome too!
tianen
2008-09-04
ch 4,
abuseI have to say... awesome fanfic. Though i'm not really sure about the whole narutoXsakura pairing... I'm mean no offense but i don't think Sakura is suitable.
AznPuffyHair
2008-08-25
ch 3,
abuseit's really too bad u didn't post an epilouge that sets a few years down the road. this is the fanfic universe, thus anything, and that means ANYTHING can happens so no one will say it's unlikely that this happened or that happened (so long as it's not TOO out of the universe). Either way, it's a good story. Hopefully people would start writing more Naru/Shion soon. Too many Naru/Hina and Naru/Saku tends to reverse ur appetite for them.

well, u have fun and enjoy urself ^^ pat urself on the back for a job well done.

PS: It's very clear that Naruto is whipped by the opposite sex. It's just the various degree of obviousness. Let's say for Hinata, if she manage somehow to use her fainting spell against him, she can probably make him do just about anything (almost anything really).
MasterBrattan
2008-08-06
ch 4, anon.
abusewas it that fic where naruto knew what she was talking about, and had been developing feelings for her
Mrs-N-Uzumaki
2008-08-06
ch 4,
abuseWhat a thief >.< You write you're own story 'cos it's fun and original. I would be super mad if someone srole mine unauthorised.
Well, I'm glad it's sorted anyway :)
Lex luthore
2008-08-05
ch 3, anon.
abuseGreat fic there should be more fics with this pairing
sharknight6939
2008-08-05
ch 4,
abusewell im glad you go tthat sorted out and i hope u update soon
ShenobiKageKitsune
2008-08-03
ch 4,
abuseI started reading one of NeoZangetsu's stories and it wasn't nearly as well written or as fun to read as this one is. I wish you would continue with this one but oh well, alls well that ends well I guess.
lupin is the chocolate man
2008-08-03
ch 3,
abuseHi! Omg i just finished watching the movie today & i HAD to find a fanfic about the ending. i think my heart stopped when i heard that question & i spent an entire minute just laughing.

Anyway i love this fanfic & i dont want to come off as rude but you and Lipana are both mistaken. This movie came out during the rescue gaara arc, more specifically, right after episode 23. Of course this doesn't make sense, how can they be rescuing gaara but be guarding shion at the same time? Its important to remember that masashi kisimoto doesnt write the movies. The characters seen in the movie are the same that have been presented in the shippuden episodes up till 23. I guess this movie could take place directly after the rescue gaara arc but I do agree with you in that it definitely could not have taken place BEFORE the rescue gaara arc
Sir Chris Orr
2008-08-03
ch 4,
abuse...this is the second time I have seen this. Madhat886 was hit by a fix thief as well.
Narutomaniac
2008-08-01
ch 4,
abuseWell as long as nothing much is copied directly from yours like copy and paste, then it's not Plagiarism. Anything less than a full paragraph the same also isn't plagiarism as there are so many possible ways to write things that odds are decent that a couple sentences being directly te same is plausible. Especially in a story with similar plot aka Naruto making a baby with Shion.
Though anything more than a few staggered sentences here and there isn't cool and could and would be plagiarism.

I myself never read his story, but if it caused you to raise this much of a stink about it then I assume it was more than a few sentences directly taken from your story. As if it was just like the series of events in his story directly mirrored yours then it's not really plagiarism as with this type of story there are not many different ways to write these events.
grey mage
2008-08-01
ch 4, anon.
abusehuh. i really need to complain more now. glad to see that you took action.
Art is a bang4979
2008-08-01
ch 4,
abuseOMG That's horrible!
garv
2008-08-01
ch 4,
abuseit is not also the first time that they put this complaint type to neozangetsu, grimmalice taenia problems with the one to place similar chapters in the fic alone i suffer.
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