Heya!

I loved these two chapters.

Gods, I hope that Naruto, Itachi nor Sasuke ies. They are just so important to me.

I hope to see you soon with another chapter.

-Yulia

I don't really understand Sakura's actions here. Why is she helping Sasuke find Naruto when he's still a Missing-nin, tried to kill Naruto the last two times they met, and still won't return to the village? Just because she's surprised he asked her doesn't explain why she would throw herself so enthusiastically into helping him. She doesn't even ask what he wants Naruto for and since he clearly isn't there to 'mend fences' it can't be anything good. And then when she can't find him she turns around and starts blaming Sasuke?

I really love this story, I just don't understand this part.

I now proclaim you a deity...you have to be one to write a story so spectacular!

Seriously, each word was worth salivating for; I love how you've portrayed the characters.

I wish you'd have a little more sasunaru though. Don't get me wrong, I'm a BIG fan of itanaru; it's just my wicked desires peeking through! In my dirty mind, I'd want Naruto to have both of them :)

O.O Geez...I hope they kill Madara soon...

I hope he can do it too. i'm excited about the next chapter. the suspence is getting to me.

Yay, finally had a chance to review; school is an evil thing that keeps me away from the things I love XD But that means that I get to re-read this chapter again before I review, so I guess it works out in the end.

Anyway, I thought it was really interesting to see things through Killer Bee's eyes, it gives a new perspective, makes you see things you missed before. That world that Naruto is stuck in seems awful, all that pain and seeing those images doesn't sound fun.

Can't wait for your next chapter <3

I LOV DIS!! I'VE CRIED & LAUGHED MY WAY THROUGH & AM NOW IN NEED OF READIN' MORE! PLZ, UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU ARE POSSIBLE! I NEED 2READ MORE! IM ADDICTED!

A New Chapter! Killerbee's perspective is really interesting and amusing too. I really have to admit that he is one of the most queer but interesting characters.

So, what Naruto is experiencing is a genjutsu? I really hope that he'll win, and I wonder what's up with Hachibi, since he won't answer Bee and stuff. Please, oh please let nothing bad happen to Naruto... Don't let him die~~

Hopefully, Naruto and company would be able to finish the battle before Kakashi and his team arrive since it's all too possible that they might be caught in the crossfire. But, it's Madara so it might not be too possible right?

Well, thank you for the awesome chapter and I really enjoyed reading it! It's too sad that the story is coming to an end, but I'm looking forward to the next chapter all the same! :D

It's the worst thing in the world to be stood unable to help a loved one I think Itachi and Sasuke would must rather be fighting Madara than that.

i really enjoy readig your story. hope naruto will survive and find a way to destroy madara. see you soon with another chapter !!

HELL YEAH! I've been waiting for this :D I had to go back and read the end of the last chapter because i forgot what happened (ahem)

I like the way you've written Killerbees POV. It makes the story a bit more interesting well in my opinion anyway or I may just be biased cus I lub Killerbee :D

Madara makes me lol. He's becoming more and more like the typical villain who wants to take over the world but before he does that he's going to tell everyone exactly what he's going to do and how he's going to do it so that just in case you didn't quite know how to stop him beforehand you now have his detailed taking over the world plan to decide exactly what you should be doing to thwart his efforts (not so much here in the manga mainly you've made him more badass than Kishi)

One thing that I noticed- Tsunade is not the FORMER Godaime she is still the Godaime but she is the former Hokage... Well I think so anyway... I've now confused myself :S

I'm really really looking forward to the next chapter and I'm beginning to wish that I hadn't got hooked on this story until you've finished cus you keep leaving us with awful cliffhangers and its kinda painful please don't leave us waiting too long or I might die (really!)

and on a completely unrealated note I have to ask you were you made to take general studies for a level? I wish the subject would die painfully (well if that were possible) please tell me it gets better D:

Omg! I can't wait to read more!!~

Love it as always X) Poor Karin she looks like she might notice the slightly more than brotherly affection for Naruto soon. Oh well fangirls never win. Where did zetsu get off to? mysterious. And poor Itachi. He's probably going to have a brain aneurysm if he keeps beating himsel up. At least sai is there for the comic releif XD

love-niki

*glares at you* Too short! WAAHH! :(

Argh! I want more. I was getting all into it and suddenly looked at the scroll bar thingy and was like 'No! It can't be over yet!'

Sigh...I guess I can attempt to wait patiently eh? I really can't wait to see how those swords work out. I figure they've gotta get into the story at some point.

But I was hoping to see a bit of Killer Bee rapping. :D

Oh and I finally caught with Doctor Who a couple of weeks ago. I'll start on Torchwood next. :)

Oh, interesting. I never thought about something like this, you always have surprises. :)

Looking up the Wadjat eye, there were some things I hadn't known before. I knew about the Eye of Horus, but not it's supposed powers or the different names and the beliefs around it. So, it was interesting so read.

Anyway, I'm excited to see what happens next! Itachi needs to kick some ass too; don't forget to give him some spot light in killing the crazy Uchiha. Ha ha.

And everyone back in Konoha... wow, they've got some major trust issues with believing Naruto's just out playing pranks. I know he's not completely responsible, but he's dedicated and I think he'd be a little insulted at the opinions of his peers. :) If anything, I'd hoped they would panic slightly merely because Madara and Sasuke are still out there.

Just a little skeptical that they would take things so easily. Either way, they'll be surprised. Ha, I bet they'll show up after all the action and be all... O.o

Ha ha. So thanks for the read, and I hope you update soon with a longer chapter! You rock! :)