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Reviews For: The Void

XxEyelinerHeartsxX
2008-06-08
ch 1,
abuseOh come on... It wasn't that bad. I actually found it interesting. You have quite an imagination. :]
Living.By.Will.
2008-05-31
ch 1,
abuseI liked it. It could have been a wee bit longer but it's fine where it is too.
It is a different take on how Dally and Jony meet up. Not heaven not hell... It was good!
Deidara is my conscience
2008-05-23
ch 1,
abuseOkay...it wasn't too bad, but I expected a little better. But I still enjoyed the fact that Dally was dancing around the answer as to why he was here! LOL! That made me laugh! Like I said, it wasn't too bad. Pretty fast and quite funny actually...

But I'm still planning on writing that fic for Dally and Cherry. Thanks to your PM I remembered I'm supposed to do that...*sweatdrop*...I'll get right on that now actually. LOL! Good oneshot...un - Deidara is my conscience
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