WOW! WOW!! what a wonderful job you did. It a very hard job to be so awesome with emotions. I SALUTE YOU<3

I would say that this here is a ... is a ... a yes here are the words to my opinion:

T'is a beautifully, and carefully written fanfic. that captures both of watanuki's & doumeki's personalities. Like your drabbles, this one made its way to the favorites list~

Actually, wikipedia's wrong on that point. The terms "Ayakashi" and "Youkai" sometimes overlap, but generally it appears that the major difference is that Ayakashi can usually only be seen by people with a strong spiritual sense (like Watanuki or Natsume in "Natsume Yuujincho").

absolutely loved it
it was kinda hard to see Doumeki bottom but made the story more real since with Watanuki so put out with the whole situation it's hard to believe he would be willing to bottom
and your sence of humor...I loved that even more
great story XD

This was very good! Yay, I have a new favorite! xD x'3
\(^o^)/ I hope you write more Douwata fanfics! <3
Now I'm gonna go look for more stuff on to your profile~ :D

Aw! that's just the sweetest thing. I liked it a lot. thanks for telling me about the story. I loved it all, i really enjoy your style of writing. Your phrasing is amusing and fitting to the story and characters. And the best of all Doumeki is UKE! yay!

Ah, that was satisfying. ^_^ Yes, a well-written treat. Not too long and not too short. Although it was too long for me to read it all in one sitting before work, so the last half of the last chapter is more fresh in my mind than the rest. Therefore, anything I had to say about the previous chapters I have unfortunately forgotten. Sorry. I can say, however, that I'm sure whatever I had to say was entirely positive.

I can tell you're a good writer, someone to keep an eye on, so I think I'll add you to my Author Alert, if you don't mind. Hopefully you'll keep up the good work. =)

Until next time,
Eloarei

ah!

Lo pense... espero no estar equivocada... pediste que comentaran y yo queria ponerte un comentario largo... pero no sabia como... porque escribir mucho en ingles me cansa -__-

Despues vi tu perfil y descubri que sos de Argentina (yo soy de ahi tambien), ahora con gusto te dejo un comentario-critica constructiva. Espero que no te moleste que lo haga en español ^^

ha sido hasta ahora, uno de los dos mejores fanfiction de holic que haya leido!

La descripción de los sentimientos de ambos fueron simplemente asombrosas! Pude imaginar cada segundo de la historia gracias a que estaba asombrosamente detallado, pero no aburrido como la mayoria de cosas que me toca leer, que se centran en el alrededor de los personajes, describiendo todo con palabras bonitas, pero olvidadndose de que lo importante son los personajes y no el color del banco en el que estan sentados, o el aroma de las flores (eso es un ejemplo).
Me conmovi hasta las lagrimas cuando Watanuki se sento a llorar ;_;
Y diste una explicación mas que coerente al silencio de Doumeki.

Y si, me gusto que por una vez Doumeki NO hiciera el papel del "seme", me cansan ya con esa mania que tienen de ponerlo a Watanuki como el "uke" (no, yo no comparto eso de "Watanuki es el uke perfecto").

La otra es que no te consentraste en hacerlo romantico, sino más bien algo muy cercano a lo qe podria pasar en la serie real. Mis felicitaciones por esto ultimo.

no hay ningun consejo que pudiera darte... los consejos me los deberias dar vos a mi dado el hecho de que sos tan buena escritora.

no se me ocurre que otra cosa odria escribirte... espero que de algo te haya sevido mi comentario, y espero no haberme equivicado al escribir en español la "review"... es que si no no ponia nada. -Repito- no se me dan bien los comentarios largos en ingles.

Me voy a dar una vuelta de vez en cuando por tu pagina asi veo que otras cosas escribiste y las nuevas historias que vas sacando.

una ultima cosa... No habia visto nunca antes, a nadie escribir con un vocabulario tan extenso en ingles! ¿A donde fuiste a estudiar?!

WAI :D the best! i finally had the time to continue reading this story and it was AWESOME! good job! i hope you keep writing in the future! ~ your words and vocabulary are better than mine xD

This story was really well thought out and written. I really enjoyed it even though I prefer Doumeki as the seme... Anyway, awesome fanfic. ^_^

eh... ? i understood only part of it. there were so many words to read that i couldn't get everything straight in my head.. um.. i understood the parts where yu connected it to the manga.. since i read that, but it was confusing. oh well :) it was good anyways lol :D

nyahaha xD who knew that Doumeki would have to be the uke?! xD lol, good work so far :D

LOL xD i was laughing so hard when i read the part of "That certainly IS an unsually big mess." lol ~ hope the rest is good :)

I have never seen a fan fic that actually kept the heart and soul of the characters, plot, and cannon possibilities as alive in their rendition as you have, 10/10. 2 thumbs up. 5 stars. Freaken. Encore.

It was breathtaking in many ways.
It was so easy to picture what was going on with your detailed descriptions, as well as it was easy to follow the conversations. Plus the story's plot itself is something that I would love to see in the actual series - and knowing CLAMP I wouldn't be surprised if something like that would acctually happen.
You kept all the characters in-character and that's a big plus. I also loved the little, short notes that brought humor in the story. It made it even more enjoyable.
I must say that it's a great story to read ^^