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Utsukine 2008-07-22 ch 2,	abuseSasuke seems like the typical arrogant sexist that would exist in traditional Edo. Sakura is as awesome as always. And Naruto is the considerate best friend that totally deserves a hug. I like the plot so far, though I'm not fond of Ino's attitude... no one I know is but... anyways, update soon! I'll be looking forward to it! ~ ♥Tsuki-chan
missysillivan 2008-06-30 ch 2,	abusereally like the story. update soon!
Celestia White 2008-06-23 ch 2, anon.	abuseHey, you! Umm, you're probably looking for some constructive criticism, but that's going to be a problem with me...so...yeah. Anyways, I'll just take the time to sing your praises. First, I just love that this fic is centered in the time when Edo became Tokyo. I've read manga like Rurouni Kenshin and a little Meji Dracula book on it too. I can definitely see the difference from your last fiction [Not the Same] and this one. Sakura's personality is just genius; not too annoying and not too serious. I love how you added little twists into it like explaining the whiteness of Hinata's eyes as a blindness. Her back story makes perfect sense as well. It was clever of you to incorporate Ino's blooming dislike of Sakura into this story as well; I sense their will be some competition for Sasuke-kun's heart, eh?? Umm, what else...? Do I really need to say anything else aside from the fact that you are a genius with stories and words? I mean, your plots are original, they have depth, they have a hidden meaning that is just so inspirational to your readers, and your writing style is just unique. Oh, and your humor is 'out there likewhoah'. Teehee. I love you and your writing, Dani-chan! Celestia White ps. shun the writer's block!
keiko-uchiha 2008-06-11 ch 2,	abusei liked it. I can't wait for the next chapter.
jenny-R 2008-06-11 ch 2,	abuseSuch a great chapter! I know what a pain transitional chapters are, but you managed to keep the interest rate high. So, Sakura will be given a chance to impress Sasuke. I'm sure he won't be able to resist her :P I'm yearning for more, so I'll patiently wait for your next update. Keep up the great job!
HoshikoK 2008-06-10 ch 2,	abuseME WANT SASUSAKU AND AWESOME UPDATE. haha, favedd. and fave author, your writing is amazing, except for the fact you made some of them american instead of them being normally japanese. hey, did you make Sakura American in this story? What about Sasuke? Can't wait for the next chapter. xx
Darkofthenight 2008-06-10 ch 2,	abuseThis is such a great story! I was really surprised by Hinata but it's still a great addition to the story, it makes it more original. It's very refreshing to see a good story every once in a while. :]
pepperspray 2008-06-10 ch 2,	abuseRather than finding the chapter bad, I found it incredibly amusing. Ino seems to be a real piece of work so far. Look forward to the next chapter!
NorthernLights25 2008-06-10 ch 2,	abuseI love this story so far! Please update soon!
deedee2034 2008-06-10 ch 2,	abuseyay! this is really good!! i hope u update soon!! love ya bye!! :p
Kawaii Koneko92 2008-06-10 ch 2,	abuse=) I don't know what you're talking about, I liked this chapter very much. It fed my curiosity for more background information! I hope you update soon. Thanks.
tarzi-kins 2008-06-10 ch 2,	abuseMoar, plees? o_o Loveitloveitloveit! I had sixty six fanfiction story-things to go through and this one is by far my favorite! -adores- Thank you so much for such a refreshingly well-written fanfic, my dear. :)
Livvy22 2008-06-10 ch 2,	abuseParty oN!! Rockin story!! Keep updating!
empty-spaces 2008-06-10 ch 2, anon.	abusegreat chapter, i like that you made HInata blind it sort of makes the story more realistic, and i like how you give little backgrounds of the characters right in the middle
runwithskizzers 2008-06-10 ch 2,	abuseyou know, for a transitional chapter, this def was not boring at all. I loved it - i can't wait to see what happens! and ooh, ino, she better not eff with sakura's **, ferreal. i think my favorite part was the very end (not just bc its sasusaku!) but bc it's such a great way to counter everything that was being said about her... just the way you parallel the silence and the (somewhat excessive on ino's part) speaking. lovez it, bebe, totes. can't wait for the next chapter!

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