Another chapter or two

This was a great story, there aren't to many good one with 17 in them, but you got it! I love how you kept everyone perfectly in character the whole time, loved it!

They never really explained the origins of 17 and 18. After the android/cell saga both of them became cast offs. I dont think 18 became an official z fighter because she didn't fight majin buu and 17 didn't either. What would be cool is if they made 1 more saga for dbz that would take fans more in depth of the cyborgs past. How where they really like before they ran into Dr. Gero. I think they were not fighters before enhanced their human abilites

*sniff* That was the sweetest thing ever!

Thank you! After a heartbreaking reading of "angsty" 17, I neede this.

..oh...*Teary eyed* That was so cute!

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HEAVENLY! *hugs whoever-you-are* THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! *composes self* That just made my day. I thank you from the bottom of my heart. *hugs breifly* *lets go* sorry, sorry...*coiugh cough*

Very cool, and short! Yay! I thought 'aaw' when 18 hugged 17 at the end. _

Brother and Sister was a cute fic you wrote. Looking forward to the next chappie!

aww! what a sweet story! keep it up! #17 and #18 rule! yayaya!

That was great! I loved the way you portrayed the twins in this.

Awwww! That was so sweet! Oh please write another story like this soon! There out enough out there! Keep up the good work okay? You keep writing and I'll keep reviewing.

that was soooooooooooooooo sweet!

Eh... it's okay... damn, you seriously had me going that this was going to be an Android Number Seventeen - Gohan romantic fanfic, y'know? ...I guess not...