Great story! Poor Tifa running off to make sure she didn't screw up Cloud and Aerith's marriage and having HIS kid! Glad it had a happy ending!!

HAHAHA! I'm reading it again so I'm hella cracking up on “What’s going on here!?!” Yuffie exclaimed as both of her hands were placed on her cheeks.

claps claps! awesome soo great!

i say we don't end it next chap either good job on this one

A little work is needed but it was still pretty good

Finally, updated! Okay since you were able to update, I shall tell you meh review. Don't get mad or anything. xD

There were some few grammar errors. Also, you still haven't changed with the 'dot dot dot' part.

In chapter 8, I guess the kidnapping of Skye was a bit sudden but it did gave me a few laughs such as Vincent stalker. Creepy~ 8_8

And that's about it! Update soon, keiz?
Oh btw updated meh KH fic~
Lots of love and Cloud plushies for you would be coming soon!^=^

nice i like the little scene with cloti well i can't wait for the next chap

nice so sad well i can't wait for wats next

wow cloud actted like an ** wat ever it was short so you know i have to say can't wait till the next chap

OMIGOSH! update hurry hurry! i need to know what happens what does cloud do? is skye in trouble? lol please up date son! xoxoxox :P

don't you just love when a little kid spoil all your secrets? can't wait for the next chapter

Oh snap! I can't wait for the next chapter! please update soon

omfg wy you cut it off so short i want wait 4 wat next

I wonder when Cloud will find out about Tifa and his kid... I can't wait! I wonder how Cloud will react to having a child. Please update soon! Great chapter

thank you!
can't wait for the next chapter!