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| CrimsonShadowOfRegret 2008-08-09 ch 2, | abuseOf course I enjoyed it! And,I know it'll probably defeat the purpose of the story if he did,but why didn't Kai at least suggest paying for Tala's surgery? |
| CrimsonShadowOfRegret 2008-08-09 ch 1, | abuseOh,Tala,you're not unlikeable at all! We all love you! Nice chapt.,Lyson! |
| tala-fangirl 2008-06-16 ch 2, | abuseI luv it. plz update soon |
| Winterblazewolf 2008-06-10 ch 2, | abuseWoots, Kai and Tala went on a date although it was not an official one. Heehee, I can't wait for the official one! I wonder where Kai will bring Tala. I kinda feels sorry for Wolborg for not being able to go. I'm getting attached to him! =D Poor Tala... being borned blind... I supposed he's right about being grateful not to know what it must be like... I can't imagine not seeing anything! Update soon! x) |
| StZen 2008-06-08 ch 2, | abuseSorry about my last review, I meant to say 'chapter' but for some reason I said 'oneshot'. Anyway I love this story, it's adorable! C= And poor Tala, I feel for him =( But it's getting really good so update soon! ^^ |
| Purple-Kissed-Wishes 2008-06-08 ch 2, | abuseNo. It wasn't good. It was FAN-BLOODY-TASTIC! =D I really enjoyed it, and I can't wait to see their date =P Tala being blind like that is so cute! |
| GabZ 2008-06-08 ch 2, | abuseso cute!! i loved it, Tala is so cute! i love blind Tala! |
| Silverywolf 2008-06-08 ch 2, | abuseI enjoyed it and it was good, thank you for updating! |
| Winterblazewolf 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseI have a feeling this is going to be interesting since Tala is blind and all. Good job. x) |
| chrono-contract 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseUPDATE! off to a good start ^_^! |
| iixne 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseu BLINDED tala?! = O how'z he suppose to see Kai's hottness if he'z BLIND?! and i jus spoiled it for anyone who readz reviews before the story = P lol. CLEARLY Tala's uke here, = P i mean how would he f* Kai, feel around? "I think i found ur hole!" "nope- uh, actually... i'm on the other side of the room..." lol xD but aw, i felt sad like when tala was like "i'm not likeable? = (" por no self confidence Tally = ( xD anyway it was, interesting! = D keep writtin foo xD - iixne P.S couldn't help but noticed u wrote HIS instead of HE'S again and i went O_O mfg! >= O RAWR Stephie OUT! |
| Dreading 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseawsome... you have to write more on that.. im already in love with the plot xD thank you for the story so far.. Cheers |
| Silverywolf 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was good I liked it. A little sad on Talas part but in a good kinda way. Nice, calming and well writen. |
| StZen 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseAw poor Tala. Nice one-shot, it was moving. I enjoy happy/sad fics like this one ^^ |
| Purple-Kissed-Wishes 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseOh a new story from Lyson =D Yeah, you're right, I haven't as yet read a story like this one, so way to go for thinking of the idea XD Aw. I actually said "aw" when Tala asked Wolborg is he was that unlikeable. I expect you to update, Missy XD In your own time, thouhg, of course! |