This is truly great, and it has stolen the place in my heart once reserved for Wanting The Virus. This is a beautiful story, and I hope you continue soon.

Ethriel

i, don't think blind ppl have empty eyes, what do empty eyes even look like? o_o ... Anyway, oh nuz! Kai's BOTHERED by his BLINDNESS, and doesn't want to ADMIT TO IT. But wait in like chapter 2 kai asked "when did it happen" and Tala sayz " i was born like this" and kai sayz "surgery?" and Tala sayz "expensive" so does this mean that Tala just needs surgery to see, cause it that's so, then why doesn't kai just pay for it so he never has to look at these empty eyes- HM??

I mean he is RICH, yes?

And YES, kai IS perfect

...the perfect f* xD...

Anyway that was a good story, i mean chapter, lol, yes that's right, i'd rather type out the correction then hit back space

DON'T QUESTION MY LOGIC

xD Anyway, I MUST go to bed

= ) latez

Awesome story its so kawaii i love how you have written this and because Tala is blind and you explain things so well u can kinda see things from talas point of 'view' 2 its a great story and very touching. Can't wait to read more.

:O


Just...little shocked face.:O


I was so sos so happy to see this update, really I was. Because this is such a sweet little story. I really love how well you can convey Tala's thoughts and feelings through his blindness. It's amazing actualy, really nicely written.


Thanks for updating...but you know this means I have to ask you to do it again...soon...XD

I've been waiting to read this chapter all day but didn't get time until now!
Such a lovely chapter! I don't think I've ever read a lemon so touching as that one! =) So moving, and beautifully written!
Now that you've rediscovered this story I hope there will be a sooner update =D
Take care!

YEY!! you found your story and updated!! it was so great!i loved this chapter :D

I'm so glad you updated this =D

Aw, Kai and Tala's first kiss!! It was so sweet =D PKW approves!

Aw, bless Tala!! He thought he wouldn't turn on =(
But Tala can turn anyone on... Blind or not. Even if he had no legs. But he does have legs, so, erm... I'll shut up XD

AH!!
Sexytime!!
Hawt...
*Drools*
*Fangirl scream*

Hahahahaha. I love the lemon... It was so different to all other, well, normal lemons out there =O

I love this chapter XD

Of course I enjoyed it! And,I know it'll probably defeat the purpose of the story if he did,but why didn't Kai at least suggest paying for Tala's surgery?

Oh,Tala,you're not unlikeable at all! We all love you! Nice chapt.,Lyson!

I luv it. plz update soon

Woots, Kai and Tala went on a date although it was not an official one. Heehee, I can't wait for the official one! I wonder where Kai will bring Tala.

I kinda feels sorry for Wolborg for not being able to go. I'm getting attached to him! =D

Poor Tala... being borned blind... I supposed he's right about being grateful not to know what it must be like... I can't imagine not seeing anything!

Update soon! x)

Sorry about my last review, I meant to say 'chapter' but for some reason I said 'oneshot'. Anyway I love this story, it's adorable! C= And poor Tala, I feel for him =( But it's getting really good so update soon! ^^

No. It wasn't good.

It was FAN-BLOODY-TASTIC!

=D I really enjoyed it, and I can't wait to see their date =P Tala being blind like that is so cute!

so cute!! i loved it, Tala is so cute! i love blind Tala!

I enjoyed it and it was good, thank you for updating!