Yes, yes, yes.

I really enjoyed this latest set of drabbles, not just because of the emotion that was portrayed, and you've portrayed it beautifully. What you've shown here is that Jack and Elizabeth are more than just the sum of themselves, but they are part of a whole, and that there is a piece missing.

I loved seeing the guilt, the fact that both of them care for Will and that they are torn by what they feel for each other, and for him. It is, I believe, seldom seen in much of sparrabeth, but is what they both would be feeling.

You've done justice to it, and I applaud your Jack and Elizabeth, the most realistic portrayal I've come across.

lol, i love how every single person seems to believe it is in jack's character to adopt will's son as his own something that would probably surprise him, but that we all expect. very sweet.
write more soon!

lol, very sweet )

lol, creeper P but Ragetti really is sweet when it comes right down to it

*sharp intake of breath
this would make a wonderful one-shot, if you cared to expand upon it (and give it a happy ending) lol

*sigh* why must they be difficult?

lol, yes i hardly think the pansy would appreciate such talk P but its not as if she's lying lol

horrible sad, but fitting in that way that suits jack perfectly, but still takes you by surprise (

*cracks knuckles
alright love, i shall review. XD i already went through and read every drabble, but i like them all enough that i shall revist them to give you feedback on their awesome-ness(i am also procrastinating on my hw
lol, im quite certain those two would never forget that beginning to the point of it driving them insane P

These are very well written drabbles, getting a lot across in an economy of words.

There is only one thing that bothers me about them.

Jack and Will, and Elizabeth and Will, all share a history. One that is not as filled with dismissal and latent animosity as these drabbles suggest.
I would like to see more of the Elizabeth that cared for Will, and shared a love with him (yes, she did, sigh), and the Jack that cared about Will and gave up his immortality for him (yes, he did, sigh).

Showing the feeling that they had for Will would go a long way to a more realistic Jack and Elizabeth.

Poor Jack I ussualy hate drabbles but these are realy good

Sparrabeth rox my sox

HAHA Will is finaly starting to get what he deserves

Aw so sad(

a perfect spparabethy summary of the biggining of potc