 Amaya-Admired 2009-09-07 . chapter 1i...uhh...well...*nosebleed* holy crap.
you made my day with this story.
and no joshua, it is not just sex, it is a wonderful story!
~Amaya |
 FinchyMcFincherton 2009-07-23 . chapter 1I'd be willing to beta, if you still need one. I don't have a Beta Reader Profile yet, but PM me if you'd still like me to do it. |
 Feral Phoenix 2009-02-21 . chapter 1I'm sure I've already mentioned that I love the way you write these two. And I love the setup here--it shows their intimacy on all levels, and manages to be sexy without being explicit.
Neku doing dishes ♥ |
 Raven the Joker 2008-06-10 . chapter 1Funny and romantic in a way. Good job, I love it. ^^ (Gives thumbs up)
Keep writing.
Raven. |
 Soranator 2008-05-27 . chapter 1Yay! :D I think this is the first JoshNeku that I've seen with naughtyness in it ^_^ Very well written, very sweet. |
 Papi 2008-05-26 . chapter 1 That made me squeal. I really love the verbal jousting that goes on between these two -- I think it's why I've fallen so terribly in love with this pairing.
Oh, if you still need a beta reader, I could give you a hand -- I'm only taking two summer classes so I have a load of free time, and was planning on writing some fanfiction myself. I'm a grammar Nazi -- but mainly a style/character Nazi. I can generally tell when something is out of character for someone as long as I'm well-versed in the series. Not that you have that problem at all. I'm surprised you even need a beta reader. But yeah, I'm here to help if you could still use it. That email is the best way to reach me.
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 The Scarlet Pencil 2008-05-25 . chapter 1I really love this. You capture Neku's and Joshua's personalities very well. Excellent fic! :) |
 Pink Shimmer 2008-05-24 . chapter 1You, sir or madame, are sex. D:
No, really, this is really awesome~! I just love what you wrote here. X3 Enjoyed every last minute of it. :D
Love how you did both Neku and Joshua here. Keep up the good work. :) |
 Kuraii Koneko 2008-05-24 . chapter 1That just made my day. :)
Joshua and Neku are SO ADORABLE TOGETHER. *squee* And you did yet another amazing job of writing them. I love it. I look forward to more, much much more.
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And if you need, I would love to beta for you.
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 Composer Gizmo-chan 2008-05-24 . chapter 1Aww, so so so so kawaii! -squeals in delight- I read some of your other fics on here, and you are indeed and excellent writer. ^_^ Keep up the great work!
Oh, and also... if you're still interested, if I had some spare time on my hands, I could try to beta for you sometimes. ^^ I wouldn't mind, and when it comes to the grammar department, I'm a grammar freak or something. ^_^;; Of course, it'd be my first time, so, like, don't kill me if I missed something. ^^; |
 Luciana Costa 2008-05-24 . chapter 1A very nice story, and I'm not just saying this because I'm obsessed with the pairing. I like how you separated it into 9 parts, it gave a nice sense of time passing. I also liked how you switched between povs. A very good fic. :D Keep writing! |
 sou-chan2000 2008-05-24 . chapter 1Awesome.
Freakin AWESOME!
Keep up the good work! |
 Feel the PANDA 2008-05-24 . chapter 1aww. that. is. so. cute~! |
 Ruemaja 2008-05-24 . chapter 1Goodness! That was just perfect!! ^_^ Much love. I'm sorry if I can't say anything coherent but, I'm just... utterly in love with it! Much love, Much love. |
 DyingHerInnocence 2008-05-24 . chapter 1aw~ you make one fangirl happy again today :D
I love this... yeah, more JoshNeku and awesome one! You make it really great, and I like your choice of themes xD
It's short but really touches - especially in the last line
hope you will find a beta!
keep writing :D |