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Amaya-Admired
2009-09-07 . chapter 1
i...uhh...well...*nosebleed* holy crap.

you made my day with this story.

and no joshua, it is not just sex, it is a wonderful story!

~Amaya
FinchyMcFincherton
2009-07-23 . chapter 1
I'd be willing to beta, if you still need one. I don't have a Beta Reader Profile yet, but PM me if you'd still like me to do it.
Feral Phoenix
2009-02-21 . chapter 1
I'm sure I've already mentioned that I love the way you write these two. And I love the setup here--it shows their intimacy on all levels, and manages to be sexy without being explicit.

Neku doing dishes ♥
Raven the Joker
2008-06-10 . chapter 1
Funny and romantic in a way. Good job, I love it. ^^ (Gives thumbs up)
Keep writing.

Raven.
Soranator
2008-05-27 . chapter 1
Yay! :D I think this is the first JoshNeku that I've seen with naughtyness in it ^_^ Very well written, very sweet.
Papi
2008-05-26 . chapter 1
That made me squeal. I really love the verbal jousting that goes on between these two -- I think it's why I've fallen so terribly in love with this pairing.

Oh, if you still need a beta reader, I could give you a hand -- I'm only taking two summer classes so I have a load of free time, and was planning on writing some fanfiction myself. I'm a grammar Nazi -- but mainly a style/character Nazi. I can generally tell when something is out of character for someone as long as I'm well-versed in the series. Not that you have that problem at all. I'm surprised you even need a beta reader. But yeah, I'm here to help if you could still use it. That email is the best way to reach me.

The Scarlet Pencil
2008-05-25 . chapter 1
I really love this. You capture Neku's and Joshua's personalities very well. Excellent fic! :)
Pink Shimmer
2008-05-24 . chapter 1
You, sir or madame, are sex. D:

No, really, this is really awesome~! I just love what you wrote here. X3 Enjoyed every last minute of it. :D
Love how you did both Neku and Joshua here. Keep up the good work. :)
Kuraii Koneko
2008-05-24 . chapter 1
That just made my day. :)

Joshua and Neku are SO ADORABLE TOGETHER. *squee* And you did yet another amazing job of writing them. I love it. I look forward to more, much much more.
:]

And if you need, I would love to beta for you.
:'D
Composer Gizmo-chan
2008-05-24 . chapter 1
Aww, so so so so kawaii! -squeals in delight- I read some of your other fics on here, and you are indeed and excellent writer. ^_^ Keep up the great work!
Oh, and also... if you're still interested, if I had some spare time on my hands, I could try to beta for you sometimes. ^^ I wouldn't mind, and when it comes to the grammar department, I'm a grammar freak or something. ^_^;; Of course, it'd be my first time, so, like, don't kill me if I missed something. ^^;
Luciana Costa
2008-05-24 . chapter 1
A very nice story, and I'm not just saying this because I'm obsessed with the pairing. I like how you separated it into 9 parts, it gave a nice sense of time passing. I also liked how you switched between povs. A very good fic. :D Keep writing!
sou-chan2000
2008-05-24 . chapter 1
Awesome.
Freakin AWESOME!
Keep up the good work!
Feel the PANDA
2008-05-24 . chapter 1
aww. that. is. so. cute~!
Ruemaja
2008-05-24 . chapter 1
Goodness! That was just perfect!! ^_^ Much love. I'm sorry if I can't say anything coherent but, I'm just... utterly in love with it! Much love, Much love.
DyingHerInnocence
2008-05-24 . chapter 1
aw~ you make one fangirl happy again today :D

I love this... yeah, more JoshNeku and awesome one! You make it really great, and I like your choice of themes xD

It's short but really touches - especially in the last line

hope you will find a beta!

keep writing :D
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