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| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-08-16 ch 1, | abuseA great story. I liked the part where Horatio was thinking about Marisol. |
| MaryMagdalen 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. What more can I say? Leni |
| Mtwapa 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abusethank-you so much for writing this. It's nice to see some new HM here. That was so raw and heavy. The brevity of the piece and the short, sweet recollections that H had, really added so much depth. I liked the choice of poem too. The lines that really struck me were his thoughts at her funeral, how if only he had walked away and refused her - she'd still be alive. THere's so much in those few words to be said about their relationship. Reading this, I still can't believe they killed her off, but then when such wonderful pieces are written about what happened, it almost changes my mind, and at the rate Horatio's going it seems he's destined to never catch a break. Loved the make-shift vase line too! |
| CaineSpeedle 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing...you really seemed to capture Horatio's pain and torment with losing Marisol. Excellent job! CaineSpeedle |