Really good... especially love the ending!

I love the way you express Nick's feelings.

I love the way you make him write a story about his experience.

It really does touch peoples' hearts.

this is beautiful :)

I like it. It was a very realistic and something I think Nick would have done for Annie. That movie is so much more than just a guy being in limbo and the shocking plot twist is that the girl that almost killed him is the only one able to see him. It's more about how two invisible people came together despite all odds and saved each other. I think you captured that feeling quite well.

wow. i loved this.

wow that was awesome :]] it would be a good book the prolougue i mean :]]

this was a really good ff!keep writing!always,jess

That was great! I like to think that Nick would've become a writer and share their tale with the world. Loved it!

wow. This is, I imagine, a very accurate continuation and look into the character's minds. purely amazing. Good job.

Loved the movie, and this is the perfect way to continue it. Loved it, luv.

Now I really want to see this. What you wrote was really powerful. Awesome job.

that was incredible...

and what i would expect Nick to feel and say too