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Reviews for: It takes two to tango
Chaosmaiden07
2009-07-07 . chapter 1
Wow, awasome, you rezlly got the tango done. But you made the Alcade be too nice. You haven't really finished this. Like what happenes in the end you left it a cliffhanger. Just one more paragraph please?
MadaMag
2008-06-21 . chapter 1
A bit rough and rash, but a nice story.

Great idea to make the tango as the initialization point and the dreams to make Victoria see things clearly. Victoria's decision was, IMHO, a bit to quick/to easy for her (after all she loved Zorro for over four years). Also, you hinted Esmeralda x Ignacio, but then you left your OC alone (you haven't "finished" her story - one two sentences about would be enough).
Very good is the 'showing' of tango ie. the steps, you could build a bit more onto it.

All in all, good story if a bit too short.
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