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Reviews For: His Epilogue

Kaerith 2008-06-02 ch 1,	abuseI like this one. Some of the phrases you used are just so great- "an unfamiliar, uncomforting voice" and "his loving face from that daybreak implanted itself in my mind forever" are two. I also like the pacing and formal Archadian way that the characters speak. I may just get into this pairing after all. :)
Cela Aerecura 2008-05-27 ch 1,	abuseChooses to ignore the very last part Still. Love the flashback-style, and how bittersweet all of this is. You write them both convincingly, and this really inspired me. I might do some fanart, even. Also, I really hope you do write more Gabranth/Larsa. The world needs more of them.
kinky boot fiend 2008-05-25 ch 1,	abuseAmazing. Lovablely angsty. It's so gorgeously brilliant and adorable and I LOVED the part about how Larsa envied Gabranth's facial hair. The ending made me tear up, it was so good. Super-awesome work.
iShiznitch 2008-05-24 ch 1,	abusesaufgjkhvhsdkzjfxnmcdskjxfesdkfjmhvd YUS. "I remember envying his facial hair, a trait I wouldn’t have the pleasure of having for a long time." ALL YOUR BEARDS ARE BELONG TO US. The "almost a tantrum but not really" part was SO CUTE. heehee. AWESOME. YAY. SO HAPPY. BWAHAHA. I hate you. For writing so damn prettily. THAT'S PROBABLY NOT A WORD but that has never stopped me before. I'm kidding. Lurve you~ THIS IS SPARTA.