really well written

Ah, to know what is really important! Great story!

That's really cute, even if the forbidden fruit moral ish thing isn't generally regarded as cute

totally, completely in LOVE with this story. You're a really great author, by the way. :)

Super cliched last line, but I absolutely adore cliches, so I don't mind! Good job!

Well, that definitely seemed to be a successful exercise.

Good job!

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this is so great! i especially love the last line! the characterization was really great- i loved being inside of scorpius's head and seeing what people thought about rose.

great job!

This was great! Scorpius was so matter of fact. The pace was really nice.

I absolutely loved that. You wrote exactly how i imagine their relationship, and it was brilliant. Shot. D

That MUST go on my favourites list. MUSTMUSTMUST.

It has a wonderful level of vocabulary, beautiful details. I think you can get away with Mary-Sues, too :) I only know a few people who can do that.

It's perfect. Really. One of three RoseScorpius oneshots that I've been able to really feel.

Awesomeness Fwee!

Wings

*squeals* omg that was so cute! i loved it!

I think his confidence at the end of the story was sexy... and i love that he watched her all the time.. not in a scary stalker way... but in a schoolboy with a crush way... aw this was sweet and i really like it!

Nice...

Very well written one shot. Loved it. Good work!

Whoa!

I love your writing style. Really nice work with this.