 Queen Emily the Diligent 2/5/12 . chapter 1You made me cry. So beautiful. |
 Sammy Holzbein 6/29/11 . chapter 1A fine peace of literature. I like the somber and bittersweet air it has. Thanks for the enjoyment. |
 Jasmine blossom625 5/8/11 . chapter 1My first time finding and reading this. It's incredibly sad and heartrending, but at least Kenshin finds peace at the end. Of course I was expecting Kenshin to die in the fight; the fact it was Kaoru was equally painful, if not more so. Well-written and I loved the fight scene as well as how it is told from Kenshin's perspective. Wonderful job, and thanks for writing. |
 unsung soldier 4/20/11 . chapter 1wow... this was verry sad but a great oneshot. Congrats on it being very well written. |
 amaterasu1000 9/9/10 . chapter 1This is a good one shot, a nice continuation fic. I can't believe how old it is, though. |
 Mariagoner 6/28/10 . chapter 1Very sweet, very sad, and very appropriate for Kenshin. Lovely story. |
 Kenshin's Soul 5/9/10 . chapter 1I can't believe I missed this fic. I been reading RK fics since either 2003 or 2004. I saw your fic in L. Mouse's favorites folder and the title caught my attention because it's an unusal title so I had to read it.
Even though I admired Kaoru for her determination and not so traditional like Japanese girls are supposed to be but I dislike her for beating him so much in the manga and the TV series. Anyway, I did cry for she died because death can be hard to deal with. I thought for sure Kenshin will be dead because the Death Reaper beat him. I love the little guy saying "Father, why are you lying in the walkway? Did you fall down and hurt yourself?(you forgot your question mark at the end of that sentence
I love the interaction between granddaughter and grandfather.
My other favorite is this"No. Someone else. He came by twenty years ago this day. I offered to dance with him, and we did."You danced with a man? I thought only girls could dance with boys.
Hee hee. Cute but funny. Then it was wam, bam, thank you
ma'am when it was Kenshin's time to die. I cried again!
You did a wonderful job writing this fic, even though it's 9 years old. |
 Brukaoru 4/25/09 . chapter 1This was fantastic! Very well written and the plot is really great. I love how in tune to the characters it really is. Excellent work! |
 Seishuru Magni 12/2/08 . chapter 1Exquisite. Truly something worthy of reading. I think im going to have to read more of your stuff. |
 Dark Knight Gafgar 9/19/08 . chapter 1Epic. |
 Inuki 6/24/08 . chapter 1That's a very sad and touching story. I'm glad you wrote it and shared it with everyone. |
 Cat 11/26/07 . chapter 1 Beautiful and solemn. Very nicely done. |
 Isis the Sphinx 9/22/07 . chapter 1It's a rare fanfic that makes me cry, and you have done it. This was absolutely beautiful, and I truly enjoyed reading it. Keep writing! |
 kk 4/11/07 . chapter 1 aw so sad T_T |
 L. Mouse 3/30/07 . chapter 1This is a truly lovely story. Well written and fitting for Kenshin. |