 shieldmaidenofthecarribean 2008-10-28 . chapter 7Ah! I LOVE it! You're really good at writing romance fics! keep writing!
And you didn't kill Toby!! Yeah! (bonus point) :-) |
 NelliethePieAngel 2008-08-14 . chapter 7 Oh my goodnesas goodness goodness. My sister and I were shrieking and crying with happiness at this one. Please, keep writing! |
 ConfusedColumbia26220 2008-07-20 . chapter 7AW! Yay! :D Update soon! |
 Todd666 2008-07-14 . chapter 7Very nice! Update, please! |
 Don Ricci 2008-07-14 . chapter 7I love this story, please add more. That was funny, 'comparing how you feel for me to murder' haha! |
 TheDreamChaser 2008-07-13 . chapter 7Thats cute he is start to care GO SWEENETT AND HURRY UP |
 IsabellaMarieCullen3214 2008-07-13 . chapter 7Ah, poor Toby. Sorry for not reading it sooner, I was watching an awesome movie. Music Within, check it out. |
 love-it 13 2008-07-13 . chapter 7awesome fanfic i love it keep writing and updating :} |
 Don Ricci 2008-07-09 . chapter 6I love it, please add more, it gets a bit confusing because of spelling and grammar errors though. If you want you could email me the chapters and I could edit them for you, I almost always have PERFECT spelling and grammar (not bragging or anything, it's just the truth) but I can't actually seem to write a story so instead I like helping other people with their stories. |
 ConfusedColumbia26220 2008-06-19 . chapter 6Update soon! I love it! |
 ConfusedColumbia26220 2008-06-19 . chapter 5*squeals and claps happily* YAY! He finally told her! Even though she is drunk, but still! Wonder why she was drinking so much in the first place...(I don't remember the events of Chapter 4 very well) |
 RAK-MK-LJR 2008-06-16 . chapter 6I |
 Mrs.NateRiver 2008-06-15 . chapter 6Thanks. ( bites the cookie)
This was soo ooc but I loved it nonetheless.
Cute and short but perfect chapter.
UPDATE SOON! |
 Mary Black Lovett 2008-06-15 . chapter 2 Your fic is PERFECT! I LOVE Sweenett! |
 TheDreamChaser 2008-06-15 . chapter 6good thing she pass out for ur great story have a bif cupcake and please more and get a cupcake |