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Reviews for: An early Christmas present
Hcainefan123
2009-04-14 . chapter 1
Great Story
Vanilla Slash
2009-02-25 . chapter 1
Oh, that was cute! XD Mac's protective anger was fun. :P Totally cute oneshot!
McMackenzie
2008-12-31 . chapter 1
That was good.
NCISLOVER
2008-11-08 . chapter 1
I love it. :) update soon
natzbadfairy
2008-07-06 . chapter 1
loved it. i think lindsey and Mac is a great couple and it's even better to see great fics about the two of them. please write more XD
Katlynn888
2008-06-29 . chapter 1
I'm not sure you've got the time line about right...unless Lindsay's about one month pregnant and it's the middle of March. Then, yeah, it'd be about right. But, around March, things usually begin to heat up. I mean, I live in Michigan, and the tempurature around here and New York is about that same, but I could be wrong...

But this was very good. i loved it a lot. Are you going to continue? no? AW...

Well, this was very good, and I'm glad you wrote it. Put some thought into continuing, hun!

-Lynn
MeredithandDerekfanforever
2008-06-24 . chapter 1
I loved it.

Brandy
jagnic233
2008-06-02 . chapter 1
Really really sweet, you should write a sequel
Mishelle20
2008-05-26 . chapter 1
Very cute fic, I loved reading it.
dark and depressed
2008-05-26 . chapter 1
this is really good
mjels
2008-05-25 . chapter 1
love it
Daisybelle
2008-05-24 . chapter 1
Cute, but I can't really get over the fact that Mac is old enough to be Lindsay's father. I much prefer Lindsay with Danny, but that's just me.
Sini
2008-05-24 . chapter 1
Nice to see you're back :) I know how it is with unfinished plot bunnies *cough*guilty as charged*cough* This was sweet and I love it, so thanks for posting it!
JaydenBell
2008-05-24 . chapter 1
that was cute...much enjoyed
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