 Hcainefan123 2009-04-14 . chapter 1Great Story |
 Vanilla Slash 2009-02-25 . chapter 1Oh, that was cute! XD Mac's protective anger was fun. :P Totally cute oneshot! |
 McMackenzie 2008-12-31 . chapter 1That was good. |
 NCISLOVER 2008-11-08 . chapter 1I love it. :) update soon |
 natzbadfairy 2008-07-06 . chapter 1loved it. i think lindsey and Mac is a great couple and it's even better to see great fics about the two of them. please write more XD |
 Katlynn888 2008-06-29 . chapter 1I'm not sure you've got the time line about right...unless Lindsay's about one month pregnant and it's the middle of March. Then, yeah, it'd be about right. But, around March, things usually begin to heat up. I mean, I live in Michigan, and the tempurature around here and New York is about that same, but I could be wrong...
But this was very good. i loved it a lot. Are you going to continue? no? AW...
Well, this was very good, and I'm glad you wrote it. Put some thought into continuing, hun!
-Lynn |
 MeredithandDerekfanforever 2008-06-24 . chapter 1I loved it.
Brandy |
 jagnic233 2008-06-02 . chapter 1Really really sweet, you should write a sequel |
 Mishelle20 2008-05-26 . chapter 1Very cute fic, I loved reading it. |
 dark and depressed 2008-05-26 . chapter 1this is really good |
 mjels 2008-05-25 . chapter 1love it |
 Daisybelle 2008-05-24 . chapter 1Cute, but I can't really get over the fact that Mac is old enough to be Lindsay's father. I much prefer Lindsay with Danny, but that's just me. |
 Sini 2008-05-24 . chapter 1Nice to see you're back :) I know how it is with unfinished plot bunnies *cough*guilty as charged*cough* This was sweet and I love it, so thanks for posting it! |
 JaydenBell 2008-05-24 . chapter 1that was cute...much enjoyed |