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| sakurapedals 2008-08-22 ch 1, | abuseomg i loved this story! I was balling my eyes out(in a good way) |
| MysticSpiritus 2008-08-01 ch 1, | abuseYou made me tear up a little there. I very much enjoyed this. Wonderful. Mystic |
| Youko-Kokuryuuha 2008-07-14 ch 1, | abuseAww, that made me glow. .< I hate feeling like the nit-pick though, but you typed 'and and' back in the 3rd. Also, shouldn't the 'simple' in [“You will pass on to the Farplane,” he said, as if it were the most simple thing on the planet.] be 'simplest'? Other than that, there are no faults. Superb job Costa. :D ~Koky |
| wickedsugarrush 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseThat...was beautiful! It's something I could never write, and I am so glad you did. If you didn't write it, then someone else would have made the ending so terribly unbearable, and so terribly sad. But, you made it happy, even if it was a tad melancholy. Which is for the best. Thank you. |
| CultivateYourHunger 2008-06-04 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, this rocks a lot! The opening even reminds me of an idea I had ages ago that starts like that but Rikku's really gone for good (or so and so plot plot etc). I like your version better anyway :D |
| La Editor 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abuseD: I just realized I didn't post a review for this. Oh, gawd, Tasha. Every single time I read this, I get this great, happy mood goin on and want to write until my fingers fall off and go do something absolutely stupid. And that is just such a good philosophy - moments. I think that will be imprinted in my brain even when I'm old and my teeth are falling out and I don't even know my own name. This is just SUCH A DAMN GOOD STORY I COULD DO A TOTALLY RETARDED TAP DANCE ABOUT IT. (Aughnuh, you shameless flatterer. My stuff is like, -20x better than yours. Which means it ISN'T!) |
| Sylla 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abuseSo I figure I owe you a review. =P First let me say that it's wonderfully sweet and Aurikku and makes me go all warm inside. For your first Aurikku, it's pretty damn good. I actually liked how at first he's 'Him' and then changes to just a 'him' when she meets him again; kinda suggests that maybe she'd built him up to more than he really was in her head, or something. XD However. (Most ominous word on the planet, that.) I thought the part about them hugging each other until the sunrise was just a leetle overly... sentimental, and actually detracted a little from what was otherwise a really nice Moment. Maybe it'd be better to have, say, the kiss and just then the sun rises, and she has to choose and can't stay any more? Something like that, I think, might work a little better. On the whole, though? Really, really liked this. Especially the way she is at the end, all happy and living for the moment. =D |
| grieverwings 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseAck. This gave me warm fuzzies. X3 It was very good, very beautiful, and very... well, both of them. :) You deserve many props for such great work. |
| starry34 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abuseOkay, that is 100% amazing. Just unbelievably excellent. I LOVED it! |
| MordreLupis 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is an AWESOME story! You should definatly write some more AuronxRikku stuff. |