The story is awesome I can't wait for the next chapter good work

I really like the fact you turned saphira into a goddess

Squeen"oh the doom"
me"the Galbatorix part reminded me of the movie the princess bride and the Eragon movie

um... technically isn't Saphira and Eragon immortal because of being a dragon and rider thing?

Squeen now wants a freakin'ferret thanks dude

Squeen:waffles

beastness ! where did you get the idea for the tail-bite thing?

LOL it was really good like freakin'always

YOU AND YOUR CLIFFYS(SHAKES HEAD)

your put alot of Murtagh in THANKS!

this is just a therory but i'm pretty sure when Selene ran away while she was pregnant with Eragon she became weaker because she was so far away from Morzan maybe it's like that if it's true then wouldn't Saphira becoming weaker?

obviously you know brom is Eragon's father not Morzon or Morzan whatever

interesting very interesting

um... doesn't make sense sweet

haha Nasuada's **

um you wrote that eragon had golden eyes either that was meant to be there or it was a mistake