ah! i loved it ^^ a fitting end...i will keep watch for these sequals you speak of hee hee ^^ and i thank you for waiting pationtly for mine ^^' i pormise it'll be up soon ^^ and thank you for thanking me ^^ that was sweet of you ^^

This story is really cute, it's so sad that that they got seperated though. I'm really looking forward to the sequel!

I just have one thing to say...LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT! It's awesome so far. I'm currently working on an Oddworld fanfic of my own and can't wait to get it on this sight. Hope you get the next chapter up soon. Can't wait!

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YAY! it looks good! ^^

o! i like it! i think this could make a very intresting story! write more! i want to know what happens ^^

Hello It's me the author. I'd like to clear up one little thing, It says that the Mudokons have a queen and the glukkons have a queen. It never said anything about sligs having queens.

OGM WTF femail Slig?!1 derez unly 1 slig qween in da oddworld seriez an she dunt even apear! Dis aint as guud as mi fanfik i bet ur an troll who leikz trollin cos itz a insult 2 propa authurz liek me

Nice job so far, keep up the good work.

o...this is interesting post the continued chapter soon i wanna know what happens