Oh, this was simply awesome... a wonderful summary of the events from Carter's POV.

Excellent job! :)

(**goes off to grumble more about the stupid "boys" in charge of SGA...**)

i never get poems but from what i do get it was good

Great peom! It's really sad! I loved the last part.

That was beautiful sparkly. I really can see Sam thinking that. It was sad but the end was nice.

Aw. That was sad. But their situations really do parallel. And I love the last stanza. I like how it rhymed and I really really liked the very last line and how they kinda came from The Count of Monte Cristo.