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Reviews For: Beyond His Years

swordbunny4486
2008-08-17
ch 1,
abusedeep and sad
Kay
2008-05-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseI really enjoyed it - I'd always wondered how strange it must be to go back and be treated like a child.
JuseaPeterson
2008-05-27
ch 1,
abuseWow, I really liked this one. I love how you had it from the teacher's POV in seeing the differences in the way Peter and Edmund were. I love how Edmund was trying to explain what had happened.

You did a really good job with showing Peter and Edmund and what was going on with them in such an interesting way. I could really feel what Edmund was saying.

Amazing.
hpswst101
2008-05-27
ch 1,
abuseThis a nice one. Thanks for posting.
hpswst101
redrose7856
2008-05-25
ch 1,
abuseAw. This is cute. And it fits Edmund perfectly! I like it!
~redrose7856
On Edge
2008-05-24
ch 1,
abuseOh...It was cute. I loved Ed...and still love him...
Havah Kinny
2008-05-24
ch 1,
abuseWow...I REALLY, REALLY LIKED THIS! a lot!
DanaeMariSkywalker
2008-05-24
ch 1,
abuseThis is great! I love how this teacher is talking to Edmund and noticing how he grew up. I think it's really sad what Peter's going through in your story, but it's understandable because of him being High King of Narnia and not able to go back and be a king anymore. Keep up the great work! I loved this! :-D

~DanaƩMariSkywalker
Lia06
2008-05-24
ch 1,
abusethat's amazing; i really liked it. it was a great exploration of how life had to be for the pevensies after returning from narnia.
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