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| swordbunny4486 2008-08-17 ch 1, | abusedeep and sad |
| Kay 2008-05-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really enjoyed it - I'd always wondered how strange it must be to go back and be treated like a child. |
| JuseaPeterson 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseWow, I really liked this one. I love how you had it from the teacher's POV in seeing the differences in the way Peter and Edmund were. I love how Edmund was trying to explain what had happened. You did a really good job with showing Peter and Edmund and what was going on with them in such an interesting way. I could really feel what Edmund was saying. Amazing. |
| hpswst101 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseThis a nice one. Thanks for posting. hpswst101 |
| redrose7856 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseAw. This is cute. And it fits Edmund perfectly! I like it! ~redrose7856 |
| On Edge 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseOh...It was cute. I loved Ed...and still love him... |
| Havah Kinny 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseWow...I REALLY, REALLY LIKED THIS! a lot! |
| DanaeMariSkywalker 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is great! I love how this teacher is talking to Edmund and noticing how he grew up. I think it's really sad what Peter's going through in your story, but it's understandable because of him being High King of Narnia and not able to go back and be a king anymore. Keep up the great work! I loved this! :-D ~DanaƩMariSkywalker |
| Lia06 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abusethat's amazing; i really liked it. it was a great exploration of how life had to be for the pevensies after returning from narnia. |