Wow. That was really good.

This is amazing. I've never really thought about Pippa plight. It is truly amazing.

Wow. That was so sad... You are amazing, really. You should write more like that. The thing was nearly perfect, apart from 'crueler' isn't a word, you say 'more cruel'. But that's just me being a perfectionist, and if something bugs me, it MUST be fixed. Sorry, I know I'm weird. But your story was so beautiful, I just sat there for five minutes after reading it, speechless.
Thankingyou =D

beautifully written!
I like the ending the best

Oh, delicious! You've given her so much depth and tragedy that my heart aches for her. Beautifully done!