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Carol
2009-11-04 . chapter 4
Oh hell...I think he deserved a helluva lot worse then that. O...just wait till I get my hands on you Mutt...*growls at*
Dreams Of Naughtiness
2009-08-16 . chapter 4
nice finish. i really enjoyed this fic and would like to see you write another about these too. it would be good to see Indy carry out his threat and use his belt, it seems like an Indianna Jones thing to do. brilliant work! x
Dreams Of Naughtiness
2009-08-16 . chapter 3
oh oh!! am biting my lip in anticipation of the snake incident! really what is mutt thinking. i can see a leather strap in his future o.o
Dreams Of Naughtiness
2009-08-16 . chapter 2
ooh silly Mutt. Indy was fearsome! Mutt's gonna be in big trouble. I like the old fashioned ideas in this setting, the way Indy says things like 'How could you do that to your mother!?' Its sweet and sets the scene for the time the fic is set in.
Dreams Of Naughtiness
2009-08-16 . chapter 1
Love the first chapter. Great banter!
Von
2009-07-07 . chapter 4
Fascinating story!

Although I don't actually like spanking of teens or tweens, for this period and this situation, its pretty understandable!

I'm torn between wishing for more of a happy relationship between them and admiring you for writing what really is a VERY awkward family development! :D

They didn't have self-help books for Dads in those days.. :D
MikiNare
2009-04-24 . chapter 4
Please please continue with this story. It's really really good and I love the dynamic between Mutt and Indy. You are a very talented writer. Please update!!
june08
2009-03-05 . chapter 3
hope, you'll update soon.
Lauren Swann
2009-03-04 . chapter 4
At last I read the final (4th) chapter. I don't know why it took so long, but... I loved this! You made Indy do just like he would have done in the movies. He was exactly like I imagined him to be.
rabid-squirell-3
2009-02-17 . chapter 4
i wish youd update this soon, i really really really really really like this
Lauren Swann
2009-02-09 . chapter 1
Omg! This was amazing. I can so clearly see Indy saying or doing things as you have wrote them. Please, I beg you, update soon.

(And sorry for my English, I'm a Finn, so..)
HybridDaughterMisty
2009-01-06 . chapter 4
HAHA! Great story! I'm also a big fan of jlbrew23! He's awesome! I love almost all of your stuff, and really hope you update this soon, as well as the others! Great job, and happy, writing.
Meg
Padawan Jan-AQ
2008-11-02 . chapter 4
Wow! Haha all the students are scared of Indiana now! I bet the news will spread like wildfire to all of his classes. And poor Mutt, I'm sure people will all know. Yikes! Love the dynamics! Thanks for posting! Please update when you have time!
Padawan Jan-AQ
2008-11-02 . chapter 3
Muah ha ha ha!! Love it! Mutt is so devious! Fantastic writing and development and progression. Love your characterization of Mutt!
Padawan Jan-AQ
2008-11-02 . chapter 2
Oh, poor kid!! I love this! Fantastic! you do a terrific job of writing Mutt, and Indiana is fearsome to the extreme! Nice emotions. Thanks so much for sharing it!
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