Reviews for Melodramatic HIATUS

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Nozomi-sama 2008-08-12 ch 7,	abuseHeehee, back from vacation and on a r & r spree~ So this review is gonna be a bit short. Muhahahahaha. I was right about Roxas and DemDem. -dances- They /would/ look sort of cute together. That is a pretty awesome crack pairing, in my opinion. Better than even LarxKai. Th mystery of Riku's past is still irking me. I must know about it. I must! Axel remains as wonderful as ever. The story continues to make me giggle all the time. And, yes, Roxas--your random teenage angst does make sense. :)
Only-Slightly-Obsessed-Un 2008-07-30 ch 7,	abuseAh man, as usual you had me giggling all through this chapter. Tifa was spot-on characterization, and Reno had Axel at gunpoint because of some stupid stuff he got into? Yep, a spot on Reno too. The AkuRoku friendship was just plain adorable and the AkuRiku was the smex ;D One problem: You don't update fast enough! T-T As soon as I read the newest chapter I have an over-whelming desire to read the next one. Apart from that, 's all good!
Alurax 2008-07-28 ch 6,	abuseok... i accidently reviewed to 7 without reading the end... so, i think i know... Zack?... or Aeris... but i don't think Sephy'd visit her... so i'm stickin with Zack
Alurax 2008-07-28 ch 7,	abuse“Eh-heh. I guess you got it memorized then.” hahahahahahahahhahahahhahahahhahahahhaahhahahhahahahhaahabahhaha I LOVE IT, and it's really funny to be crackin up about stuff around people who don't understand why yur crackin up JOY plus i gotta know... did you catch the kitchen on fire, with cheeze? ^_^
Rikanu 2008-07-25 ch 7,	abuseHey, you updated. I was starting to worry that you gave up or something. Oh man, I don't know what to say besides that I liked this chapter. It's eight in the morning here and I haven't slept all night, so I'm really tired... Um, well. Oh, the AxelRoxas friendship scene was very cute. Yay for Axel being a sap! x'D And of course the AkuRiku moment, heheh... idiotic grin Can't wait for more, I'm feeling kinda AkuRiku deprived right now. About the grave, uh... Well, an obvious answer would be Aeris or Zack, right? But my first thought was Aeris 'cause of the flowers, I guess... And my other guess is Leon, but it's probably because I'm such a Cleon fangirl. Though I would prefer it if he was alive... Actually, I can't remember if he was mentioned in this fic or not. >>" feels kinda ashamed Yeah, so, keep writing! This story is getting more interesting with each chapter. :D
M. Monster 2008-07-25 ch 7,	abuseZack Fair. Because if there's a Sephiroth, there's a Zack. ANYWAY. I liked this chapter and the shameless teasing. And Tifa. Tifas are nice. :) Good work! No spelling or grammatical errors (that I could see, anyway).
viking106 2008-07-25 ch 7, anon.	abuseOh how the plot thickens. Well I think the gravestone is Zack, how he died...I actually have no idea. Yeah anyway loving it, as usual. The way you introduced the Organization was fitting and done rather well. Check that you don't leave words out though, it doesn't happen often but it can be quite distracting and annoying when reading. Maybe I'm just being pedantic if so I'm sorry, but just an observation. Anywho keep it up, and remember updates make the world go round
Rosalyn Angel 2008-07-25 ch 7,	abuseahh, two chapters to read for me. ♥ dude. i love the axelroxas friendship soo much~ chapter six was great for that. they're such awesome friends. andand OMG TIFA I LOVE YOU. LOVE ME, TOO? ♥ we got more hints this chapter! small ones, but enough... Sephiroth is related to Riku (naturally!), signed him over for some reason Riku wanted... There's bad blood between him and Cloud, but the death of Zack (I'm guessing) still ties them. Roxas and Sora used to live in Midgar? I think? rox got involved with the organization, met Axel... moved back to where they are now, axel followed--UWAH, so many characters! then there's kairi, namine, their parents (the scene with kairi and her stepmother was so sweet; I'm glad we got to see her), larxene who is awesome, and marluxia (thank you for not making him a complete pansy!)... roxas and demyx... my brain's going to explode! x.x haha, the flirting between axel and riku is great! silly riku, you'll have to accept it eventually. “You’re a fucking tease, Harada,” Roxas called from around his ice cream. “Blergh,” said Axel. LOL! I wonder how Tifa and Axel knew each other~ and the whiplash sound, reno threatening axel at gunpoint for doing something stupid, and just... every bit of dialogue? XD asdaghr. I've missed this fic. I admit to being confused on all the character relations and their past some... But hopefully it'll be cleared up later. I like how you reveal things through characters instead of just telling us straight out--if that makes sense--so thank you for that. It keeps me interested. Keep writing! I'll keep reading. -RA, out
judikickshiney 2008-07-25 ch 7,	abuseGwa!! I totally want to know what happened in Midgar! -Loved how Reno is 'not exactly stable'. He's so fricken awesome. I also loved how he held a gun to his brothers head. Nasty, sexy Sephiroth. I'm excited about him. I love Roxas. He's flippen cool. Riku is kind of an ass to Axel, but then again, Reno may deserve some of it. I guess it's just their way... :D So much fun to read! -Judi- Ah! I almost forgot to guess who's grave it is. Is is it Zach's? Or Aerith's? Right. That's it!
Shadow Vampiress 2008-07-25 ch 7,	abuseAnd here we have the beginning of Riku's attraction! Perfect timing on that. Not too soon, and not too long. Unlike one fic I read where the main couple didn't even kiss until chapter forty...Anywho, I totally loved this chapter. My god, is Axel that dumb? He's begging for Riku to tease. Though I get the distinct feeling that he and Axel are going to have some rough sex the first time around. They just seem like the type...Update soon please! Oh, and was it...Zach?
Marlin Lette 2008-07-25 ch 7,	abuseYay, im forever loving Axel/Riku and im so glad you udated. uhm Sora set things on fire with CHEESE?! lol. nice. im not goin to guess on the headstone thing for i dont want to sound like a fool... cept im thinkin maybe Zack... and he was killed by someting Cloud could have prevented.. because its so like Cloud. and Zack and Seph used to be friends... eh. okay im done.
bellzooks 2008-07-25 ch 7,	abuseOnce again, amazing work. You are seriously making me fall a bit in love with all of these characters - especially Larxene. And hooray, you bought Tifa in. Well, you bought her in last chapter, but here she was again and I felt the need to do a little dance. Essentially: you rock and are made of roses and sunshine.
Toko Tsuki 2008-07-25 ch 7,	abuseFAH! YOU MADE MY EFFIN' MORNING MAN. ;A; I WAS SO AKURIKU THIS MORNING AND I SAW THE ALERT IN MY BOX, AND I SPAZZED LIKE... SPAZ! I LOVE YOU. AND THIS AKURIKU HUMORING GOODNESS XD AND LOL THE FIRE AND THE CHEESE LOL well, since I don't wanna be a spoil sport, I'll lay my guess. One is Areith, o-o but that seemed too obvious to me, so the other guess was Leon, but then again I might be totally off because I'm horrible at this 8) Anyway, can't wait for the next! OMFG I see Riku slowly getting softer towards Axel! How cute! X3 -Koko
Namimakura 2008-07-25 ch 7,	abuseheh, i don't think i can legally guess... giggles and why, /why/ does sephiroth read as /byakuya/ to me? LOL. XD. anyway. no seriously, me loves this chapter... YUM! and the riku/axel moments in the kitchen amuse me... as well as riku's unwilling attraction... hah! sora burns kitchen with cheese! giggles and yay larxene! is amused though i'm wondering what's up with tifa and axel... is curious gonna tell us next chappie? ^^ can't wait for more! grins loves
Kitty-Cat-Kauri 2008-07-25 ch 7,	abusegood chaper made me laugh a lot!

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