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This is an amazing story even though it is not extremely long like most of favorites it definitely belongs there. I hope you update this again sometime soon.

awesome story hope that you'll one day decide to continue it.

This has got to be one of the most origenal works I've seen lately. I know you haven't updated in almost a year, but I do hope you will continue this.

Marcie really should just tell him she is invisible

Great story! Quite original and done very well. I hope to see more of it someday.

This is one of those stories that is truly unique in fanfiction. I'm pretty sure I've yet to encounter a similar story, and that is quite refreshing in itself. But most amazing is the quality of writing. Your spot on characterization, the dialogue, and the humor! Oh gosh, I haven't laughed out loud so much from a fanfic since, well forever! I can't get the floating donut out of my head. *snickers*

Thank you so much for giving us such a well written story. I hope you continue to update "He Can't See" because it's quite brilliant.

Brilliant chapter! (I especially like the part with the air horn; it reminds me of the episode "A Pox in Our House" from Season 1 of the TV show Full House, especially the scene where Stephanie uses it. :) Very cool.)

Keep up your super-neat, very awesome and phenomenally creative writing! :)

Heh. On top of everything else, he's going to feel so ridiculous when it turns out he's not really telekinetic and had nothing to get dramatic about.

On the other hand, that is kind of a really responsible reaction to finding out you're apparently the monster of the week. Again. Poor Xander.

This has taken a slightly darker turn than I expected. I guess that it had to go pretty dark considering how close to Marcie's canon appearence this fic is taking place. Still, it's an excellent story. Thanks for picking it up again. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I'm curious about how long it'll take everyone to figure out that Xander isn't telekinetic. Marcie isn't going to be able to keep up the act for long.

I know this has been updated for nearly two months now, but I just have to say:

ITS ALIIIIIIIVVVEEE, MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA

good story.

you still got the touch

I'm actually waiting for the update on this one.

One thing i never understood, Xander could fight vampires but not Larry? Besides the fact he is predispose to take a beating from his father he should defend himself.

Another thing. Belief in the hellmouth is important. Imagine now, both himself(Xander), Buffy, Willow, and Giles think he has powers and they stay near the hellmouth all the time. That belief should provide the powers in him regardless of the truth.

Well written, you make the characters engaging,even the ones we can't see. This could be a beautiful departure from the normal run of Zander stories, please continue it. I kile the people you write, please show more of them.

yrs Larry Huss