yes, that's definitly how it should have been..
you seem to very easily make me cry!

Oh my this is so beautiful... I love it.
But if this was how it has been in Atrus family, there would be no story :]

This is GREAT! I love it! And I totally agree with the poem's message!

Wow. I was almost in tears toward the end, quite honestly, and I found myself reading it more than once.

Absolutely beautiful, and 100% true.

Oh, Tariam... this poem is beautiful. I love the way it flows.

And you're a liar when you said you're not a good poet! XD

Also, Bother. XDD