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yugiL
2009-08-31 . chapter 12
Oh. My. Gawd.
I am absolutly in LOVE with this fic!!
uke!Vegeta is the best! and-and I never realized there were so many potential semes besides Goku *A*
You are bloody brilliant! I really hope you write more and more. Please update soon~!! Meanwhile I'm gonna go back and read this fic again~
Red Kasei
2009-03-15 . chapter 12
SQUE! It's my story! Oh, thank you, my dear. I was wondering when it would be put up. Beautifully written as always and, again, my keyboard is clotted with blood from my nose. But that's a compliment of course
Julesie
2009-03-12 . chapter 12
*sniffles* I love this one. I can't wait until you eventually write the sequel and I pray Bardock survives. Their kid will be adorable
lil joker
2009-03-12 . chapter 12
why why did that have to happen to them i wanted Bardock to be with Vegeta . . . to have a happy ending (tears) wwaw why . . . but at least their will always be a part of Barkdock with Vegeta =}
Rapunzelle
2009-03-12 . chapter 12
absolutely loved it. They were so lovely together and although it was such a cliffhanger, I loved the ending. Vegeta is pregnant. Yay. Cannot wait for the sequel to this and more of these lemons
:-)
Fanatic Fan
2009-02-26 . chapter 10
I love every chapter that you write. They always enrapture me. Love uke Vegeta. Need more, maybe one of how Goku and Vegeta get together for the first time.(alwyas loved a uke vegeta with a lil fight in him) Keep up the good work.
lil joker
2009-02-14 . chapter 11
oh so Kakarot was Vegetas imagenery friend, since he didnt have anybody but his dad and bunny and since he can now have other friends he doesnt need Kakarot any more so he left . . . how cute =}

i love love love love love the lemon scene with Vegeta and Vegeta Sr. @)-;- flower for valentines day ^-^
Rapunzelle
2009-02-14 . chapter 11
Father and son. Interesting. But amazingly good. Loved this story so much. Vegeta was so cute. Cannot wait for the next chapter. Please update soon. Love these lemons.
Red Kasei
2008-11-30 . chapter 10
Huzzah for lemony goodness! This is one of the best chapters yet! I think I may have used a whole box of kleenex to wipe up my nosebleed! I rather liked the fact that you wrote that they were in a real relationship and that they loved each other. The end was very sweet, too. What I liked most was that you put it that this bondage was just a play; a spice in their life. Goku isn't always so dominant and does treat his uke with tenderness. That made it all the more enjoyable.
Your lemons are getting better and better, my dear. You don't know how I was jumping up and down in my chair when I saw that there was another chapter to this.
Absolutely brilliant! I look forward to the next lemony installment!

Red Kasei
RadXPanties
2008-11-28 . chapter 1
Normally I'm not into a lot of yaoi.
It takes some serious skill to get me into it.
But these are cute and I like the idea.
Seriously. Who doesn't like reading a bunch of PWP lemons after a long day?
Its a guilty pleasure.
I was thinking of doing something like this a few days ago except no yoai / yuri
but i don't know if I'm all that skilled at writing lemons so I might not do it.
Good thing you did though.
lil joker
2008-11-28 . chapter 10
omg how cute i love the dice game great job . . . i cant wait for more . . . um i was wondering . . . will you do another Piccolo and Vegeta story ?
Linzie
2008-11-19 . chapter 4
I like it but you need to widen your vocabulary. You used the word "cock" way too much. Try not using a word more that once in a sentence.
Red Kasei
2008-10-26 . chapter 9
KYAH!! Nosebleed, abound! This was absolutely amazing! How is it that you continue to astound me when I know your skills knows no bounds?

Anyways, I thought this little lemony sequel to the first bit was the best! I felt so sorry for poor Vegeta when he mentioned that the one b**ch was being so cruel to him and I wanted to smack Brolli upside the head for letting the girl undress him when he was with Vegeta. But I'm so happy that they're now officially together! Please, write more of those lovely little lemons.
I can't wait for the next chapter. BDSM? With who? I can't wait to find out!

Red Kasei
Julesie
2008-10-26 . chapter 9
Beautiful chapter hun, definitaly one of my favourite styles.

You described things very lovely by the way, really enjoy the many words you used :)

Cannot wait for the next one *giggles*

Ohh and, if you make another part to this one, have it that pepper finds out that Vegeta wins *evil grin*
Dragon77
2008-10-25 . chapter 9
Fantastic chapter keep up the good work.
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