I like this story I hope they get the plumber kid

I really want to see a new chaptor and I like this story they soon going to realise that a skater with rapid speed but no badge and a powerless girl with the badge are one with each other hope I get to see the next chaptor

Hope to see another chapter soon, this is very intrasting!

How come u havent written more this is interesting and i really need something to keep me from well lets just say im real close to losing my mind...going to college sucks anyways i really like ur story...bye bye

"Indeed, what she was attempting was dangerous that surely would scare the pants right of anyone performing aggressive skating." needs a "so" it should be "Indeed, what she was attempting was SO dangerous that surely would scare the pants right of anyone performing aggressive skating." not in caps, though.

great story ! ! !

Awesome story. I'm not sure if you're going to update it considering that you wrote the most recent chapter this past summer.

Well, I've just to say it's really good. Especially the part when she fell on the car. That was just hilarous!

When you read this, I hope you consider continuing this story. It's a good read and Zoe Reid is a very good character (in fact, the drawing you made inspired me to draw my own. I just haven't posted it anywhere)

Hopefully, you'll think about adding another chapter to your fic when you read this.

Awsome story. Please continue! :3

hey love the story ca't wait 4 more and what happens when kev finds out who she is

Ohh i LOVE Ben10:AF such an addicting show (watching right now, episode ALL THAT GLITTERS)

and you need to continue writing and update ASAP!

-tiffany

I actually was waiting for this fic for a long while, and I totally thought you scrapped the idea! I'm glad you didn't give it up (and thanks for the props! it was my pleasure)

Just a few pointers, there are some redundant sentences (i.e. he screamed, "AARGHH!" since this has already been stated). You have a knack for purple prose, fine for some situations, action not so much. When the prose was needed, it lacked. I have problems with this too, but I thought you should know so you can improve.

One last thing, the challenger is rare pompous for simply stepping in and asking for a fight. Sure I know Kevin deserves a pounding, but the challenger doesn't.

Anyway, I still enjoyed the chapter, and Ben being stalked by Kevin and having an extra person to help in a platonic way is a good for this section. Off to the next chapter!

hey what gives i was reading that ...u know it needs some some chaps so i can keep readin..great job so far by the way!^_^!

Awesomeness! I just found the pic of the skater girl on deviant art, way cool. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Interesting idea...please don't give this story up!

good start-always liked that fable