 Kyntak 2008-05-29 . chapter 1This is really good - I love Agent Six fanfic. And it's great to see him fighting a different kind of evil.
Grammar/punctuation tip - "he said" and "she asked" don't need capital letters. Example:
"Smells yum, can I have some?" He asked.
can become:
"Smells yum, can I have some?" he asked.
I wrote an entry for that competition too - I'd love to hear what you think. |