I am in complete and utter amazement with this story! I love it! I could not stop and do anything else till I finished it! I was so into it! I can't believe! It would make a great SGA episode!

All right, it's official: you're an amazing writer and you do SGA stories really well! I love the way you portray Sheppard, he's very much in character in every story I've read from you so far.
I loved this story, the team moments were great and Rodney's speech alsmost made me cry, too.

Thanks for sharing!

This was a great story. I read it straight through! I can not wait until you write more SGA stories.

very good story, had much fun and enjoyment in reading it.

okay...that's so the BEST story ever!
you a have great talent to keep us wanting more and more!
keep on going!
x
sophie(sorry im canadien and french lol so my english is not that good lol)

Great story and I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks.

Thanks so much for following through with this fic until the end. I would have been devestated had you abandoned it. I look forward to more from you when you get the chance ;)

yeah he's home:O) great chapt

I really enjoyed this story and I think you did an excellent job on it. I look forward to reading more of your stories when you are done with exams. I'm glad you were able to study some. Good luck with the rest of your exams.

Sigh...I'm sorry that this is the end. It was a very well-written and enjoyable story. :) Can't wait for when you're able to write more SGA fics!

*cheers and runs around the room* WONDERFUL! I LOVE this story! You did such a great job keeping everyone in character and at the same time you even developed them a little further then what the show has done for us. I absolutely love Rodney's little speech. It's so like him to reassure John and then warn him about telling people about it. All in all, great job :)

-Becca

I really enjoyed this story. The last chapter was quite nice - the expedition waiting to see him and the final conversation with Rodney were especially good.

I'm glad John will get to go back and visit - they were really nice. Loved his amazement at the city - very realistic and kind of cute to imagine. I loved all the people waiting to see the LIVE John Sheppard. And I super loved the ending with statement about the mess hall. NICE!!

I loof forward to reading your next one, so don't take too big a break.

I feel kind of sad that it's over, but I'm glad there was a happy ending.

A great ending - loved everybody waiting for him when he got back to Atlantis. I feel sad too that it's all over - really enjoyed the ride. Thanks again - good luck in the exams and look forward to the next 'baby'.