 Ducky'sgirl4ever 2009-05-14 . chapter 1A great story. Very good. |
 spedclass 2008-10-29 . chapter 1Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon! |
 Medusa Sparrow-Winchester 2008-09-14 . chapter 1Wow, that was good. Scary, but good. Better than any of my stories.
Great, great story. :D
Medusa. |
 Lena7623 2008-05-27 . chapter 1Dark Dawn! Scary stuff. Good new story! |
 Louvil 2008-05-27 . chapter 1Wow! Dark! Liked it! |
 RabidReject 2008-05-25 . chapter 1Interesting. More soon! |
 Xeelia 2008-05-25 . chapter 1Beautiful. |
 Beige Flicka 2008-05-25 . chapter 1very dark Dawn, i sorta like it, feels new :-) and weak Spike? who knew? although he's allways been weak around the Summer's girls ;-) |