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Reviews for: Nocturne
missysillivan
2009-10-16 . chapter 1
Absolutely love the story
Puddlesama
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
I like the maturity of the philosophizing and the discussion and the sarcasm despite the slight immaturity of the writing. Quite well done.
Ranchdressing
2008-06-24 . chapter 1
This is so deep and beautiful! I found myself almost tearing up during Cagalli's reason's for being with Athrun. I love this.
cottongreentea
2008-06-06 . chapter 1
Such a great oneshot. I love it! And it's true, the night does bring the best out of everyone.
sweeter-ion
2008-05-31 . chapter 1
So cute... They are so wonderful, hehe...:P
dinah
2008-05-26 . chapter 1
its an original piece with the asucaga aftermath that i always wanted to see (if it gets animated)... it gets super duper cool when they have their confusion (especially cagalli) into a conversation and i love how you made athrun as a househusband and cooks for his beloved... kawai i tell ya.. its a cool fic!love it!
GroggyRae
2008-05-25 . chapter 1
Yayz,you know what nocturne means! Did you have an idea which/ whose nocturne would be playing during this scene?
This was a ver nice snippet. I could kind of tell it might have been a while since you last wrote, you might just want to do a grammar check, and slowly read through it again, to make sure what you want to convey to the readers is clear. I think thought that this is almost a prefect reflectio of the A/C relationship. It's very realistic, a coversation I could really see them having even years down the road and after marriage. Because things like war are just things you don't 'get over.' You incorporated the angst with a very balancing dosage of romance and humor. That kept it light and it was really enjoyable to read
pgsmrocks
2008-05-25 . chapter 1
*sigh* and just when I thought Gundam Seed fandom was dying. I love it! Pure asucaga. ^_^ I think you have the characters pretty well. This would be when they are married and are crazily happy together. They sound sure of each other, even if that is what they are talking about.
Hades.Throne.Heiress
2008-05-25 . chapter 1
That was sweet. But Cagalli's semi dirty-minded herself... how else would she think of midnight snacks as something else =)

Love is you. And me. Beautiful explanation, especially saying that reasons to love degrades the feeling and existence of it.
EXY.Uli
2008-05-25 . chapter 1
i am just about speechless right now. One of the most witty, playful, and hopeless romantic bedtime conversations yet! Yeah, this is definitely going to be a favourite.
moi
2008-05-25 . chapter 1
'kay. OOC, but so darn cute.. aw
cara410
2008-05-25 . chapter 1
One word: beautiful!!
I loved it :)
shiloah18
2008-05-25 . chapter 1
oh yeah.. that wouLd be an insuLt.. if the guy can't take away the stray thoughts of his girL during their private moments.. XD

“Wait. I mean, I know I Love you, but—” she knows she Loves him demo, she's not xure if she's inLove with him? -_^ I'm confused.. @_@

Cags confeSsed? when? -.^ for aLL I know it was Athrun.. with the ring in GSD.. ne?

my dear monster? *chuckLes* lol XD

weLL.. gueSs thats the onLy thing onLy Athrun can do.. which no one eLse can.. :D

“This takes years, this takes my everything, and I’LL be nothing if this is robbed of me.” aww.. I Like it when Athrun's seLfish of CagaLLi.. ^^

big boy eh? *grins*

*giggLes* a **? XD

hmm.. she nEeded to voice out her thoughts..

oh.. the scars.. the one in his arm and the other one on his side.. both on the right, ne?

their conversation is no Longer in bed.. they're in court! XD

a mid night snack.. m..

househusband eh?

nyWeiZ, that was nice.. a gOod read I must say.. thanks to this fic.. I'm oFf to out fridge! it's one in the morning.. lol XD kakoii fic! jaa ne in BAZ or whatever AsuCaga fic your going to write or update! ;3
mehj
2008-05-25 . chapter 1
you didn't really messed up with the characters. As always, it was beautifully written. You really are one of the best! (:D)

the sexual thingy there ( I don't know how to word it out yet) was nice and it was smoothly (uumm) used or(uuhh)inputted in the fic. (sorry, my vocabulary is not rich). Though I think this should have an M-rating. The sex part is clearly defined though it is NOT the subject.And the subject was thoroughly 'explained'. It's mature. And an M-rating doesn't mean it's always lemon or lime. It should really be a mature subject, not disgusting outputs of lust or plain stupidity which doesn't really express any meaning or story at all.

**sorry for the rant(in some ways, maybe)

Excellent job! (:D)
HimeHikari
2008-05-25 . chapter 1
*melts into puddle of goo*

This was beautiful! And I like thinking that they're married :D
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