I always did wonder about a mutual temptation between those two.. and I agree with a previous review, you fleshed this story out by making both of them so intent on a goal, one not hindered by.. matters of ahem the flesh.

Oh! Very well done! I understand the difficulties that come with writing this pairing, really, I do. I was dabbling a little more with my fic the other day and I came up to a scene with these two in it and I think I pretty much stared at my Word document in despair for a good hour or so, typing and erasing and starting over, until I was about ready to pitch a literal fit.

Anywho, enough of my senseless blathering about my fic-in-progress. Let's talk about this one, shall we? I applaud you for being able to pull this pairing off in the brilliant manner that you did! As a writer who is trying to write this interesting pairing I know of the struggles that come with it. The way that you portrayed Meela was well done (considering the movies really didn't give us much to go on as far as her personality).

I don't have a lot of time for this review so I'll have to cut it off here. But I'm sure we'll talk through PMs in the next little while _

Again let me say, well done! I loved it.

This is great. I love the line at the end about the foot flying out and slamming the door shut just made me laugh. Spectacular.