wow, it's been a long time since i've read this story. it was the first, EVER, fanfic that i read. i showed it to my classmates and they all said it was a sad story. from the first time i've read it, it has been my all-time favortie fanfic. great job

Wow. That was so beautiful, dramatic, and heartwrenching all at once. Everything flowed fantastically, and I don't know what to say to criticize it. I'm looking forward to any of your future fics, because this was the best one I've read in a while.

You are a good writer and this is an incredible and touching fanfic. It's sad and dramatic. Ran and Shinichi, how could it be like that...after they suffered so much...You really made me feel like a reader with this fic of yours. Thank you very much for posting it here.

God bless!

Oh MAN. x_x I feel like I have some heavy bricks in my chest... and my throat tightened a little. T.T This story is so completely drowned in sadness, and such bitter... despondence, I don't know. I just can't express the wide range of feelings in this fic... Hopefully that description of my current physical condition gave you a mild idea, though. xD
And I thought this story sounded extremely familiar! ^^ There were some phrases which I was practically repeating myself. xD Heh, talk about photographic memory. ^^;
The narration is fantastic. You really have talent for drenching stories with TRUE sadness, since you mix elements from real life (not achieving romantic happiness, for instance) and inner conflicts (which sometimes are really much more problematic than those actual, huge "dismantle-psychopathic-and-evil-organization" outer conflicts.) The combination makes me turn a little maudlin. T.T
I'm dying to see your other 9 stories! I'll be eagerly waiting for them. :D

wow, it's beautiful! I'm on the look out for more!