Reviews for In Pursuit Of Freedom

Reviews For: In Pursuit Of Freedom

Ruler of Fanfiction 2008-08-16 ch 1,	abuseThis is awesome! It's like my fic, only different in so many ways! I don't really have anything else to say, since I'm bad at coming up with in depth reveiws when a story isn't too badly written, which yours certainly isn't. Great job!
Awesome Rapidash 2008-06-14 ch 2,	abuseFirst off, sorry it's taken so long to review, but I've been rather busy as of late. Anyway, on to the review. I really liked this chapter. I think you did a good job in bringing out Leia's fears and concerns over waht might happen. Felix seems to be quite cute abd I'm guessing that he really has taken a likeing to Leia and will be quite sad to see her return to the sea. I was happy to see that in the end the injection seemed to have done what it was supposed to have done. So, will Leia return to the sea now? I can't wait for the next chapter to see what will happen! I hope you can update soon! Ja ne! Rapid-chan
Awesome Rapidash 2008-05-25 ch 1,	abuseYeah, A Leia story! This is off to a really good start! As soon as I saw that this story had Leia as the main character I just had to read it! Of course knowing that it was from you made it all the better! As always you did an awesome job ith this! I really like how you made things sound so bleak for her. I imagine that very thing happening to her over time after all. I'm happy that you chose to pair Flora up with Daryl, I think they make a good couple! The kids sound aborable! I could just see the look in Felix's face when he realized that Leia might be leaving him! Awesome as always Moonlit! I'm really looking forward to reading more of this soon! Please update soon. Ja ne! Rapid-chan-
Trying To Breakaway 2008-05-25 ch 1,	abuseaw. how cute! I wanted more Flora/ Daryl fluff! It was too short! I'm complaining and wining! The sky is blue! Lol... I'm not funny... ANYWAYS, I liked it a lot. Yayz for two of the coolest characters being 'friends'. (Leia and Flora are awesome so just deal.) What can be cooler than a mermaid and a kickass scinetist with awesome hair... Oh wait, a kickass mermaid scientist with awesome hair! ... I think I'm the first teenage girl that is drunk without ACTULLAY every drinking achol... Wo... Sugar high.

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