 slashslut 2009-10-30 . chapter 20loved it! harry and scott might just be my new fave slash-y couple;) |
 Chantelle 2009-09-26 . chapter 20 O MY GOSH That was the best storie ever ever ever I LOVE IT ! (Loud enough for the entire world to hear) please please make a sequel please please it is the best storie I ever read I LOVE IT if you don't make a sequel I will sue you YOU HEAR! YOU HEAR! I will kill you if you don't I swear it! O.K. I think I said enough bye. |
 DrunkenElk 2009-08-26 . chapter 20Gosh, gotta love that story!
Finally a realistic crossover, which isn't too cheesy, doesn't turn harry into a god AND has good slash in it!
Your writing style is easy too read, enjoyable and there are no boring sections at all. This is the second time i read this story, and i don't usually review, but because it is a long time since i read a story of similiar quality i decided to give some feedback.
Of course it isn't perfect, but i know this is fanfiction and so i didn't expect it to be. I doubt you feel the need for people to say it is perfect either.
The few mistakes i found are minor and do not disturb the 'flow' of the story. You seem to be a bit insecure about the times, especially the past and there are a few times you wrote "he hadn't tell.." (Hermione and Ron about his love live), where "he hadn't told" would have been correct, or sth. similiar. But as i said before, these are minor mistakes. As is Professor McGonagall's name.
Your story really saved my day today, and i hope you will continue to write (especially crossovers) as good stories are hard to find.
DrunkenElk (sober!!) |
 Magic Bending Vamp 2009-08-01 . chapter 20this is the best story ever |
 rnl1993 2009-07-30 . chapter 20awesome story i loved it. You should write a sequel to it. |
 rnl1993 2009-07-29 . chapter 2fantastic chapter. |
 rnl1993 2009-07-29 . chapter 1awesome story i love it so far! |
 AterWolfe 2009-07-28 . chapter 20This is the first Harry/Scott fic I've read since getting into HP x-overs and I had almost passed it up preferring Harry with Logan, but I'm really glad I didn't. This had such a great, solid plot-line. I love the fact that Harry and Scott met before Hogwarts and that Harry was there when Scott began getting his power. Their relationship was so cute. An aspect that I really cared for was Dumbledore's character through out the story. Usually people either have a good!dumbledore or an evil!dumbledore, but you really kept it more realistic with him being good, but making mistakes that he more or less owned up to in the end.
Well I'm off to find some more Harry/Scott fics. Thanks for the read.
ATWO |
 Rokkis 2009-07-01 . chapter 20A good solid story with good characterisations. Am glad that everything worked out in the end.. it really was an HP7 with an Xmen twist:D:D
Cheers! |
 Osprey Trapper 2009-06-19 . chapter 20I had just seen X-men origin, and decided to do another search for any decent crossovers when I saw yours.
One of the better X-men/HP I've seen, although I personally found it a little too fluffy in places (near the start, mainly).
I'm also didn't like how Dumbledore was portrayed throughout your story, but that's a personal preference not a story fault.
That said, you did well in balancing the two universes. I liked how you put limitations and added challenges to the characters to add conflict and suspense, instead of putting a super!Harry in there... |
 Kain129 2009-06-11 . chapter 20absolutly loved the storie i had a great time reading it hope to read some of your other stories |
 lillybean queen of the i ocean 2009-05-22 . chapter 20i absolutly loved this |
 aylan 2009-05-15 . chapter 20Now that, was a truly great story. |
 DragonFire Princess 2009-04-10 . chapter 20Love the story, Hope you'll update ASAP! |
 sorrow angel 2009-03-28 . chapter 20Great story despite some spelling errors. I really luv Scott/Harry pairing!! I hope to read more of your fics on this pairing~!! |