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| MintExpresso 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseThe suspended realization at the beginning is fantastic- when I realized where you were taking that pretty little piece of prose, I got shivers. I can envision the rest actually happening, too, you captured all of the characters very nicely. If you continue this, which I hope you do, I'd be interested to see you explore why Wilson doesn't really blame House in a more in-depth way. Good work, keep writing! |
| i luv ewansmile 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseYay, about time someone wrote their story where Wilson actually tells House that HE is sorry for putting House in the condition he is in. Awesome job. |