Share/Save/Bookmark
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Casting Stones

MintExpresso
2008-05-25
ch 1,
abuseThe suspended realization at the beginning is fantastic- when I realized where you were taking that pretty little piece of prose, I got shivers. I can envision the rest actually happening, too, you captured all of the characters very nicely. If you continue this, which I hope you do, I'd be interested to see you explore why Wilson doesn't really blame House in a more in-depth way.

Good work, keep writing!
i luv ewansmile
2008-05-25
ch 1,
abuseYay, about time someone wrote their story where Wilson actually tells House that HE is sorry for putting House in the condition he is in.

Awesome job.
Return to Top